running out of time

48 hours

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When Kibum and I reach the spot where we broke through the guard-rail I’m surprised to see that the damage done there is minor. You wouldn’t even think there had been an accident with a car rolling down the slope.

We climb over the rail but stepping onto the blacktop I immediately lose footing because its incredibly slippery.

Kibum helps me getting up and says:

“We better stay on the other side of the rail where there is still some snow. we’ll cross over when we’re closer to the truck.”

So we keep walking through the crunching snow listening to Taemin’s attempts to start the car in the distance. There is no traffic at all, not even on the opposite lanes.

The truck is still in the same place, all lights off. We carefully inch our way over the frozen tarmac to the driver’s cabin. Apart from the sounds we make ourselves it’s eerily silent.

“It’s a bit like the zombie apocalypse”, I say before I can stop myself.

“Okay great, Hyung, now you can check the cabin by yourself”, Kibum answers behind me after a short dramatic pause. “And if you’re bitten by anything don’t get near me, I’ll just run away screaming bloody murder.”

I look back at him over my shoulder.

“No you wouldn’t.”

He pulls a face that could mean anything and then sighs.

“Get it over with, will ya?” He gently pushes me towards the cabin.

I climb the steps with some difficulty and I have to admit that I scared myself as well with the zombie remark. But the cabin is empty.

“Nobody in here”, I call, and step down again.

We scan the environment but it doesn’t look like the driver could have been forcefully tossed out of his seat. The cabin is still intact.

“Weird”, Kibum says. “But maybe someone just took him in and drove away.”

“Without calling the police?”

“Well, as I told you, the lines are all blocked and we’re not exactly on a major highway here, so they’re probably busy somewhere else.”

He might be right about that although I’m still wondering why there’s nobody around.

Then I recall that the road had already been pretty empty for some time before the crash although I didn’t think much about it then.

We slither back towards the rail and I feel a bit better knowing there is nobody dying in the truck either. At least there haven’t been any casualties in this crash.

Crossing the rail again we see the car coming towards us. They actually got it going!

Taemin’s greets us from the driver’s seat with his biggest smile.

“It’s still running just fine”, he says.

I climb onto the front-lid to get through the opening where the windscreen used to be and Taemin helps me back into the car. Turning back I want to assist Kibum but he just walks around to the passenger door, opens it, gets in, and closes it again.

“Ta – daa!” he says when we all stare at him. “This is how I got out in the first place. It’s a BENZ, guys.”

Taemin tries the driver’s door too, but it is actually jammed.

I move into the back to Jjong and Minho the latter not looking too good.

“You should lie down" I tell him.

The space is too narrow for Minho to stretch out completely but holding his upper body in my lap he can at least go horizontal with his knees bent.

“Why do I get his feet?”, Jjong asks jokingly while accommodating on the other end of the backseat.

But Minho is too exhausted to strike back verbally. I’m still worried and Jjong looks concerned too.

“Take these”, Kibum says to Taemin and hands him his fly-glasses. They’re adjusting to light so they’re even usable now in the dark. And it’s probably better than nothing since we have no windscreen anymore.

We decide to not even try to get back onto the highway. It’s way too slippery even for a slow drive. Instead we’ll try our luck crossing the field and trying to get to the nearest town or village to change vehicles again and hopefully get back on the road. Although none of us says it, we all know we’re running out of time.

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dibidibidis27 #1
Chapter 31: Waaaaaaah..... This is so good. This is actually the second story that you wrote that I've read. And just wanna say that I love both of them. I love how your stories revolve around SHINee's friendship and personalities, not just romance. And I also love that you relate them with things that really happened to SHINee in real life. Just like what you did in 'The Red Shoes' that you relatef with SWC IV, and now this, related to 'Hello Baby'. I really loooove you're stories, keep writing please.
Denkia #2
I love this ...... And I love how u wrote key character because I personally think that's how he is in real life. I really hate how people misunderstood him soo much. SHINee fighting
MissLocket #3
Chapter 31: This was soooo good. I am very happy with the ending. I was a bit scared for my Kibum, you know, but everything went fine considering the whole situation. You can't imagine how grateful I am you don't abandon the story. Please keep writing. You are pretty talented. I love your plots, storyline and how you portray characters, especially Key. He is so misunderstood and underappreciated that it hurts, so when authors like you dig deep in his persona and explore that side of him in such a beautiful way, I can only be happy.
TypicalAuthornim
#4
Chapter 31: I'll really miss this story, and I love this epilogue!!
Thanks author-nim ^-^
Jimmae #5
Chapter 31: It's sad that it's over but I'm really glad that the story turned out like this. I think every character was given what they were due. I'm really happy for this great story and I hope you would write more beautiful stories soon. Thank you very very much author-nim. ☺
dhinikeybum #6
Chapter 31: “I didn’t want them to take the sadness away. This is something I experienced and it is raw and it hurts. But it’s part of my life now and part of who I am. I don’t want to be repaired because I’m not broken, just changed.”

This...this...i feel warm inside...feel like he''s the one who say it. He accepted the reality not bcz he's the most brave out of five but he's willing to try and he just know its a part of his journey that cant be erase forever that make him grown mature and wiser and im surely the choice is not a regretful one...

Yeeaahhh typical kibum if he want something and if he make it up his mind, he wont change it and keep the promise no matter what happen next (just like the ugg boots). He dont like but willingly try. Somehow his decision make me proud and love him more. I learn much from the guy name Kim Kibum...

Upside down story but SHINee became more open and the family get warmer and onew wish granted^^

Thank you author nim for the hard work and see u in your next story^^
dhinikeybum #7
Chapter 31: Its sweet but end too soon :-(
Hope next time we can meet again in your other story.....


Uuuuuhhhhh i feel saaaaaaaaadddddddd :-(
TypicalAuthornim
#8
Chapter 30: The two are really hurt... but they'll heal soon.
Scars can take ime to heal... but they will heal for sure.
My mind is making up a story with this, am I allowed to make a story that's a bit like this? I mean, not the kidnapping, but the shot... can I?
Thanks for the update, author-nim. I'll miss your story :')