Annyeong yeorobun!

So I've been re-reading my own fanfic and I feel that there seems to be no connection between the OC as Lee Young Hee and myself as a reader. I'd like to know if it is just me or you guys feel the same too. So can you guys let out your own opinion? Because initially I made the female lead as OC so that readers would be able to picture themselves as that character. But if I fail to do so... changing the whole thing would be burdensome. But I plan to make the next chapters according to each other's POV. 

I'm sorry for this mess but I'll hope you will keep on supporting my work, this is my first fanfic and I really appreciate comments and supports from you guys. Thank you so much!!

Saranghae!! <3 <3