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Chapter Seventeen First Taste

 

 

  My legs wouldn't move and I was pretty sure my hip and right arm was broken. The metallic taste of blood filled my mouth and I hiccuped, causing my chest to burn painfully. Definitely some cracked ribs... Dear God, what had just happened?! I screamed as I was suddenly dragged upright, held up so that my dangling feet couldn't reach the ground. Opening my blearily eyes I screamed again as I came face to face with the man with blazing red eyes and fanged teeth who had been standing above me. He chuckled at my terror and his grip on my arms tightened, something sharp pricking my skin.   "This your meal tonight?" He asked of Myungsoo, his voice gluttonal through his protruding fangs.   "Let her go!" Myungsoo's voice warned from behind me.   "Ah ah ah." The Demon tsked. "One more move, Myungsoo, and I snap her pretty little neck."    I gasped at the threat and winced from the pain it caused me. The monsters eyes flickered back to mine in delight at my pain and he sneered.   "You humans are so fragile." He murmured.   I barely had time to gasp as suddenly one of his hands released me and slashed across my neck and down one shoulder, tearing half of my shirt. I screamed out at the pain, my voice hoarse and the sound only seemed to make him laugh harder. Dropping me to the floor, he smirked as I flopped like a rag doll, my head striking the ground with a defending crack that vibrated through my whole skull and down my aching spine. My broken bones were sending my body into a numb acceptance that left me shivering uncontrollably and my bleeding head feeling woozy.   "Hana!" I heard Myungsoo's voice shout, but I was too far gone.   The darkness was pulling at me, urging me to join it. My tired, abused body was unable to take anymore, my mind a fuzzy mess of jumbled truths and hallucinations. I could see Dara, rushing towards us with blazing eyes, tears streaming down her cheeks. Then there was JiYong, holding her back and looking on, his expression a mixture of regret and anger. The last thing I could hear was the sound of vicious growls, howls of pain and the distinct, sickening sound of tearing flesh. I wanted to see, wanted to know who was winning, but I wasn't strong enough.   With one last shuddering breath, I fell into the waiting darkness.     

 

"Her hand moved!" A sweet voice penetrated my comforting darkness.

Dara? I called out, searching the never ending void. I couldn't see anything.

"Hana? Hana can you hear me?" She cried. 

I ran faster, getting nowhere yet unable to stay. Dara's voice was distressed, she needed me. Where was she?

"Hana! Please Hana, wake up!" She begged.

I'm trying! I cried. Where are you? Again, no reply. 

I stopped running and curled up, my body trembling. Alone. I was alone in this darkness. I couldn't get out.

"She'll wake when she's ready." That voice.

Myungsoo!

My heart lurched as the memory of him filled my thoughts. Where was he? I felt a tug, as though my body was trying to lead me somewhere. Standing up I followed faintly, the pull leading me through the darkness and then... I screamed as I suddenly plummeted down, my body free falling into the nothingness. 

 

 

"Look! Her hand moved again!" 

Dara... I cracked open an eye, the sudden bright light almost blinding me. Quickly I shut it again.

"She's waking up! Oh Hana!" Dara cried, her voice breaking.

I tried to open my eye again, this time squinting until I accustomed to the brightness. I peeked around as I worked on getting my other eye open, and found myself in Dara's familiar room. Dajavu, I thought. Haven't I been in this situation before?

"Hana honey?" Dara's face appeared in my vision, her face lined with worry. 

"Da... Ra?" I croaked out, wincing at the pain. 

"Oh Hana." She sniffed, suddenly breaking into tears. "I didn't think you'd pull through." 

"She almost didn't." A quiet voice spoke, the sound of it causing my heart rate to pick up and my eyes to search desperately for the source of it. 

"Myungsoo?" I whispered, catching sight of him in the far corner, half of his face hidden by the shadows of the room.

His face caused my breath to falter as his eyes scanned over me, his expression unreadable. It was then I realised only one lamp was lit - the one beside my bed. 

"You look like you've seen a ghost." He remarked idly.

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joyful_mess
#1
Chapter 37: Just had the time to reread this fic. OMG I understand now why I loved this so much! I'm so happy to see that you are not done with this.
bebebebi #2
Chapter 37: OMYGOD youre baaccckkk!!!! thankyouthankyouthankyouuu
BangYongGukBias
#3
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theblackpearL
#4
Ahhhhh... I think it's been a year or two since i last opened my aff account and this is the first story i looked for in my subscribed list. I really like your story very much. Please do update soon! Happy new year ms. Author :-)
KimMieAhn
#5
Chapter 36: I am so very happy to see you updated I kept checking up on this fanfic just because I really like your story line. Thanks so much for updating. Authornim fighting!
bogusbabe #6
Chapter 36: I came for the Daragon and I stayed, hoping for more Daragon and because this story has got me hooked. I have always been a er for supernatural stories so this was no exception.

Personally I don't know who Hana or Myungsoo or most of the characters in this story but it didn't stop me from enjoying it nevertheless. I like Myungsoo because he comes off as the typical male protagonist. Handsome, mysterious, with the hero complex who only shows his soft/teasing side to family and the girl he cares for. Hana is okay for me as a heroine. Nothing against her but I just like my female protagonist more bad- and less reckless than Hana is in this fic. Kudos to you though, Miss Author, because you have been writing her character quite consistently.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters and how you're gonna handle this newest conflict. I so want to know what favor will Moonsoo ask and what is his agenda. It seems like his hatred for Sandara still exists and I'm so excited for that to be tackled. I think though when Moonsoo and Sandara finally come head-to-head, Sandara can hold her own and maybe find the ability to use her "demon hound" to the fullest.

I hope you find the inspiration to make a Daragon story in this universe because it looks like Sandara's feelings for Jiyong isn't as unrequited as she thought. I think theirs an excellent story to tell especially if Sandara is set to be married off to a more powerful demon but Jiyong is willing to fight for her. Plus, I would like to see Myungsoo's reaction when he finds out his best friend have the hots for his sister! LOL
BOICE-EXOTIC
#7
Chapter 36: OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG YOU UPDATEDDDDDDDDDDD
I'M SO GLAD U DID!
WOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
forgivenessqueen7 #8
Chapter 27: I am actually like so confused right now about Myungsoo and Hana but I trust you'll make a good ending for them :) It's just...very yeah I hope they end up together happily :D
HeartlessRose #9
Chapter 36: I feel like everytime you post a new chapater after a long time I'm out somewhere and end up causing some kind of a scene. This time around I was at my best friends graduation party and I checked AFF and saw you updated and once again, squealed at the top of my lungs. I may or may not have jumped up and down like a happy child as well and did a little happy dance. I'm happy you're back even if it's a temporary thing. Moving and can be incredibly stressful, and to me, there is nothing more stressful than a broken laptop. I feel your pain (I recently spilled green tea all over my keyboard).

Anyway moving past my embarassing moment of pure blissful happiness. I've missed this story so much and as usual you've delivered another incredible update. I swear poor Hana can't seem to catch a bloody break. I hope all goes well for her, I'm sure her having to be killed by that sword has something to do with breaking the bond. I don't want the bond to break TAT I love Hansoo (my little ship name for themxD). It excites me and saddens me to know that this story will be finished pretty soon. It is still my absolute favorite. I can't wait for you to update again and I hope all goes well for you with moving and your laptop.:D Again thank you for the epic update.
KawKaw
#10
Chapter 35: I so miss this story ; ; i read the 29th chapter like a 1000 times thinking and hoping that i will find the "next" button at the end :( I hope nothing is wrong in uri precious author's life, i cant help being worried since she's been absent for ages now :/ Come back soon <3