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Chapter Eight First Backlash

 

 

"Hey, Yoon-Hana?" 

I looked over at the speaker, but didn't recognise her at all. Just another face among the hundreds in this school I did not recognise and yet, they all seemed to know me. Such was the curse of being the New Girl.

"Um... Yeah?" 

"Somebodies looking for you in the courtyard." She shrugged, looking bored.

"Okay, thanks?" I frowned as she walked out of the gym changing rooms. 

I wasn't the last one inside, but I may as well have been the way the other girls were avoiding me. Tired of the whispers and, if I was honest, curious about who the 'somebody' was, I took off out of the changing room in my gym gear to the courtyard. Typically, it was empty and I wondered if this had been some sort of elaborate plan to make me late for gym and get in trouble when somebody cleared their throat behind me. I turned around and came face to face with Pretty Girl, Yoona, dressed in her own gym gear. She, of course, made the pale grey polo shirt, black shorts showing off her slender legs and white knee length socks looks glamorous. Just standing opposite her, I felt like a short lump.

"What did you want to talk about?" I asked, a little put off by how close she was standing to me. 

"Not here." She looked around. "Follow me.." She began to walk down one of the courtyard paths and I hesitated. 

My instincts were screaming at me that this was a bad idea. Everything about it seemed off, but my pride was urging me forward. I couldn't let her think she intimidated me so... I followed. 

"Why the secrecy?" I asked keeping my tone bored.

"I don't want your little bodyguard to interrupt."

"Who?" I remembered the incident when we had met. "You mean Dara? She's not my bodyguard." 

"It sure seemed that way when she was deciding who you can and can't talk to."

"I think you'll find that was Myungsoo." I laughed bitterly.

YoonA whirled around, her eyes blazing. 

"Don't talk about him so casually." She warned, her tone icy.

I raised an eyebrow in surprise. Wow... That was an over exaggeration. 

"Whatever." I sighed, looking around and standing still. "I'm not walking any further so you either say what you want to here or I'm leaving." 

We were on the narrow pathway at the back of the gym sheds with a metal link fence at the other side that would eventually lead to the football pitch further ahead. YoonA stopped and turned towards me, her expression murderous and I stepped back in suprise. 

"You think you're really something, don't you, Jung Yoon-Hana?" 

"What?" 

"Clinging to Dara and Myungsoo like the little primate you are." 

I held up my hands in a surrender gesture.

"Wow wow wow... Hold it right there. First of all, primate? Seriously is that all you can come up with? And secondly, I'm not clinging to anyone. Dara is my friend and Myungsoo... Well, he's her brother. I have nothing at all to do with him."

"Liar!" She screeched, and in a flash she was suddenly standing right in front of me, her hair brushing against my face. 

I stumbled away shocked.

"What the- How did you-"

"Cut the crap!" She growled. 

As in, literally, she growled. The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end and I could feel the goose pimples rising on my arms and exposed legs. I backed further away.

"You think you have me fooled?" She laughed, stalking closer. For a fearful moment I was convinced I saw fangs in . "Because you don't. I know what he's done; I can smell him all over you!"

"What are you talking about?" I demanded frantically. "Smell who?" 

"Myungsoo!" She screamed, reaching out. 

Her arms shoved my chest with so much force that I was literally lifted off my feet and sent flying back into the metal link fence, where I bounced off and smacked onto the ground in a heap. My adrenaline spiked and despite the various gashes and scrapes on my hands and knees from the fall, I leaped up quickly and took off at a run. I had no idea what was going

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joyful_mess
#1
Chapter 37: Just had the time to reread this fic. OMG I understand now why I loved this so much! I'm so happy to see that you are not done with this.
bebebebi #2
Chapter 37: OMYGOD youre baaccckkk!!!! thankyouthankyouthankyouuu
BangYongGukBias
#3
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theblackpearL
#4
Ahhhhh... I think it's been a year or two since i last opened my aff account and this is the first story i looked for in my subscribed list. I really like your story very much. Please do update soon! Happy new year ms. Author :-)
KimMieAhn
#5
Chapter 36: I am so very happy to see you updated I kept checking up on this fanfic just because I really like your story line. Thanks so much for updating. Authornim fighting!
bogusbabe #6
Chapter 36: I came for the Daragon and I stayed, hoping for more Daragon and because this story has got me hooked. I have always been a er for supernatural stories so this was no exception.

Personally I don't know who Hana or Myungsoo or most of the characters in this story but it didn't stop me from enjoying it nevertheless. I like Myungsoo because he comes off as the typical male protagonist. Handsome, mysterious, with the hero complex who only shows his soft/teasing side to family and the girl he cares for. Hana is okay for me as a heroine. Nothing against her but I just like my female protagonist more bad- and less reckless than Hana is in this fic. Kudos to you though, Miss Author, because you have been writing her character quite consistently.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters and how you're gonna handle this newest conflict. I so want to know what favor will Moonsoo ask and what is his agenda. It seems like his hatred for Sandara still exists and I'm so excited for that to be tackled. I think though when Moonsoo and Sandara finally come head-to-head, Sandara can hold her own and maybe find the ability to use her "demon hound" to the fullest.

I hope you find the inspiration to make a Daragon story in this universe because it looks like Sandara's feelings for Jiyong isn't as unrequited as she thought. I think theirs an excellent story to tell especially if Sandara is set to be married off to a more powerful demon but Jiyong is willing to fight for her. Plus, I would like to see Myungsoo's reaction when he finds out his best friend have the hots for his sister! LOL
BOICE-EXOTIC
#7
Chapter 36: OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG YOU UPDATEDDDDDDDDDDD
I'M SO GLAD U DID!
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forgivenessqueen7 #8
Chapter 27: I am actually like so confused right now about Myungsoo and Hana but I trust you'll make a good ending for them :) It's just...very yeah I hope they end up together happily :D
HeartlessRose #9
Chapter 36: I feel like everytime you post a new chapater after a long time I'm out somewhere and end up causing some kind of a scene. This time around I was at my best friends graduation party and I checked AFF and saw you updated and once again, squealed at the top of my lungs. I may or may not have jumped up and down like a happy child as well and did a little happy dance. I'm happy you're back even if it's a temporary thing. Moving and can be incredibly stressful, and to me, there is nothing more stressful than a broken laptop. I feel your pain (I recently spilled green tea all over my keyboard).

Anyway moving past my embarassing moment of pure blissful happiness. I've missed this story so much and as usual you've delivered another incredible update. I swear poor Hana can't seem to catch a bloody break. I hope all goes well for her, I'm sure her having to be killed by that sword has something to do with breaking the bond. I don't want the bond to break TAT I love Hansoo (my little ship name for themxD). It excites me and saddens me to know that this story will be finished pretty soon. It is still my absolute favorite. I can't wait for you to update again and I hope all goes well for you with moving and your laptop.:D Again thank you for the epic update.
KawKaw
#10
Chapter 35: I so miss this story ; ; i read the 29th chapter like a 1000 times thinking and hoping that i will find the "next" button at the end :( I hope nothing is wrong in uri precious author's life, i cant help being worried since she's been absent for ages now :/ Come back soon <3