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Chapter Eleven First Flutter

 

 

It was typical that when we arrived at school, we were late.

Or at least, I was, anyway. Dara somehow had managed to shove all her shopping bags in her locker and sprint to class in the time it took me just to directly run to my classroom. And mine was closer. My punishment, on my fourth day of school, no less, was to stay during lunch and help rake leaves at the back of the gym. It wasn't so much the raking of the leaves that bothered me, but how close I was working to where Yoona had attacked me. From her I had seen nothing since being at school, and in truth I was kinda glad to be skipping lunch, since I knew she'd be there. Dara may think Myungsoo could handle the situation, but I knew otherwise. A little warning off Myungsoo wasn't going keep her away, it would just make her more determined, more hateful.

By bringing it up with her at all, he wasn't really doing me any favours but at this point I was at a dead end. Petty school bullies and annoying guys I could handle. But revengeful demoness' and murderous demon hunters? Yeah, not so much. I was so far out of my element at this stage in my life that I was close to cracking. New house, new school, new country and now all this?

It was a wonder I was keeping it together at all. 

"You know, pushing them around like that hardly constitutes as raking." 

I jumped and dropped the rake, stumbling back in surprise with my hand flying to my racing heart.

"Oh, so now you're scared." Myungsoo frowned, pushing off the gym building wall to head towards me.

I watched silently as he bent down and picked up the fallen rake and held it out to me. I took it slowly.

"Are you always this observant? I've been stood there for the last ten minutes and you never noticed."

"Not everyone is interested in spending their time looking for you." I noted dryly, turning my back on him to rake the pile I had been working on.

"Now that's not true and we both know it. Everyone is interested in me." I rolled my eyes, a motion lost on him since had my back turned, but I could feel his eyes burning into me.

I stepped away purposely. 

"I've had a word with Yoona." 

"Oh?" I answered, trying to sound disinterested. 

"Yup. She said she didn't mean to hurt you, she was only having a little fun."

"A little fun?" I demanded, whirling around to face him. "Do you call beating the out of somebody, throwing them against concrete and trying to break their back a little fun?" 

"Woah." He grinned, holding up his hands in a surrender gesture. My heart thumped a little harder at the sight of his dazzling smile. "I never said it's what I thought. Her words, not mine." 

"Whatever." I sighed,  turning around and carrying on raking. "I couldn't care less what she says." 

"Hmmm..." He mumbled. 

Then suddenly his hands were covering mine and I froze as I felt his chest brush against my back.

"You're not doing a very good job of this, Little Girl." 

My breath hitched as his tickled the back of my neck close to my ear, sending chills down my spine and causing my stomach to tingle. Slowly he released my grip on the rake and stepped back, taking it with him. I stayed still for a moment, gathering my thoughts before turning back towards him, where he was raking leaves like a damn pro.<

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joyful_mess
#1
Chapter 37: Just had the time to reread this fic. OMG I understand now why I loved this so much! I'm so happy to see that you are not done with this.
bebebebi #2
Chapter 37: OMYGOD youre baaccckkk!!!! thankyouthankyouthankyouuu
BangYongGukBias
#3
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theblackpearL
#4
Ahhhhh... I think it's been a year or two since i last opened my aff account and this is the first story i looked for in my subscribed list. I really like your story very much. Please do update soon! Happy new year ms. Author :-)
KimMieAhn
#5
Chapter 36: I am so very happy to see you updated I kept checking up on this fanfic just because I really like your story line. Thanks so much for updating. Authornim fighting!
bogusbabe #6
Chapter 36: I came for the Daragon and I stayed, hoping for more Daragon and because this story has got me hooked. I have always been a er for supernatural stories so this was no exception.

Personally I don't know who Hana or Myungsoo or most of the characters in this story but it didn't stop me from enjoying it nevertheless. I like Myungsoo because he comes off as the typical male protagonist. Handsome, mysterious, with the hero complex who only shows his soft/teasing side to family and the girl he cares for. Hana is okay for me as a heroine. Nothing against her but I just like my female protagonist more bad- and less reckless than Hana is in this fic. Kudos to you though, Miss Author, because you have been writing her character quite consistently.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters and how you're gonna handle this newest conflict. I so want to know what favor will Moonsoo ask and what is his agenda. It seems like his hatred for Sandara still exists and I'm so excited for that to be tackled. I think though when Moonsoo and Sandara finally come head-to-head, Sandara can hold her own and maybe find the ability to use her "demon hound" to the fullest.

I hope you find the inspiration to make a Daragon story in this universe because it looks like Sandara's feelings for Jiyong isn't as unrequited as she thought. I think theirs an excellent story to tell especially if Sandara is set to be married off to a more powerful demon but Jiyong is willing to fight for her. Plus, I would like to see Myungsoo's reaction when he finds out his best friend have the hots for his sister! LOL
BOICE-EXOTIC
#7
Chapter 36: OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG YOU UPDATEDDDDDDDDDDD
I'M SO GLAD U DID!
WOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
forgivenessqueen7 #8
Chapter 27: I am actually like so confused right now about Myungsoo and Hana but I trust you'll make a good ending for them :) It's just...very yeah I hope they end up together happily :D
HeartlessRose #9
Chapter 36: I feel like everytime you post a new chapater after a long time I'm out somewhere and end up causing some kind of a scene. This time around I was at my best friends graduation party and I checked AFF and saw you updated and once again, squealed at the top of my lungs. I may or may not have jumped up and down like a happy child as well and did a little happy dance. I'm happy you're back even if it's a temporary thing. Moving and can be incredibly stressful, and to me, there is nothing more stressful than a broken laptop. I feel your pain (I recently spilled green tea all over my keyboard).

Anyway moving past my embarassing moment of pure blissful happiness. I've missed this story so much and as usual you've delivered another incredible update. I swear poor Hana can't seem to catch a bloody break. I hope all goes well for her, I'm sure her having to be killed by that sword has something to do with breaking the bond. I don't want the bond to break TAT I love Hansoo (my little ship name for themxD). It excites me and saddens me to know that this story will be finished pretty soon. It is still my absolute favorite. I can't wait for you to update again and I hope all goes well for you with moving and your laptop.:D Again thank you for the epic update.
KawKaw
#10
Chapter 35: I so miss this story ; ; i read the 29th chapter like a 1000 times thinking and hoping that i will find the "next" button at the end :( I hope nothing is wrong in uri precious author's life, i cant help being worried since she's been absent for ages now :/ Come back soon <3