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Chapter Thirteen First Close Call

 

 

It's my turn now!" TaeYeon laughs, shoving me out of the way as she leaps out of the booth and grabs the mic off of her friend, Yoo Lin.

"Fine, just make sure to sing something lovely." Her friend counters with an easy smile.   Sitting stiffly in the karaoke booth I'm feeling more than a little uncomfortable, though I'm trying not to show it. Everyone, and I mean everyone, is drinking and apparently it's no big deal, despite us all being underage. The boys, who I had no idea would be present, were all smoking and the small room had quickly filled up with smoke to add to the flashing lights and music. It was like a cheap, dirtier version of a club if that was even possible.   "Here." A guy muttered, ing a bottle of beer towards me clumsily.    I took it quickly, wary of him spilling it everywhere.   "I don't drink." I reminded him, since he'd already passed me three bottles - all of which had been drank by somebody else.   "'Cause you're boring." He slurred, taking a swig of his own bottle and turning to stare at me obviously. "But you're kinda cute, so it's okay."   "Gee, I'm so happy." I muttered, pushing the bottle away where it was quickly snapped up by another guy.   "No, you're really cute, actually." He correctly sluggishly, leaning towards me so he was a little too close for comfort. I leaned away, disgusted. "You're from America, right? Then that means you've probably already had a lot of action, but that's cool. I like a girl with experience." The Pig winked, placing his hand on my knee.   "Back off, Kim Lee Dong." The voice from the other side of me warned.    "Whatever." The Pig, Lee Dong muttered, shooting daggers at the boy at the other side of me. "Who'd want to sleep with a girl this boring anyway! You two are perfect for one another."    Giving me a dirty look he raised from the table and stood where the other guys were, smoking and chatting whilst shooting the girls leering looks. I sighed with relief that he was gone and moved, aware that I had been almost thigh to thigh with the guy next to me. Smoothing out my jeans I glanced at the wall clock with annoyance. It had been stuck at 5.38 since we'd arrived, probably hours ago.    "You okay?" The boy sitting next to me asked.    I turned to give him a fake smile, but somehow I knew he saw through it. He was different than the others, he wasn't drinking nor was he smoking. Like me, since arriving he had remained sat at the very middle of the booth watching the others become more and more intoxicated to the point where they had stopped asking us to sing. We both hadn't spoken much, but then again with the wailing of our 'friends' over the mics, it was pretty much impossible to hold any real conversation, not that any of the people here seemed capable of it, anyway.    Now, however, it was thankfully silent as TaeYeon fussed over which song to pick.   "I'm fine. Just getting a bit of a headache." I shrugged.    "If you're not feeling well you could just go home." He suggested not unkindly. "I wish I had an excuse to leave."   "I don't know my way back to the subway station without TaeYeon." I admitting, casting a look to the girl in question.   It would be a miracle if she even remembered I was here...   "I could show you?" He offered, his youthful face lighting up. "I need to take the subway home, too, and it will give me an excuse to leave."    I agreed gratefully and grabbed my bag, gesturing for him to slide out of the booth.   "Then by all means lead the way before Tae chooses a song." He did, and after we both said goodbye to the others, who didn't seem overly concerned with us 'boring' ones leaving, we headed outside onto the cool streets of Gangnam and in the direction of what I assumed was the subway. I spotted a clock inside a shop and cringed at the time. Mother would kill me if she knew. But the roads, despite it being close to quarter to one in the morning, were busy with drunken men in suits stumbling about and equally merry groups of women. The night was alive and, apparently, young.    "Smoky, loud and drunken teenage filled karaoke bars not your thing?" The boy asked, breaking the awkward silence.    "So it seems. To be honest, it was my first time in one, and I can't say I was impressed."   "Nor me. I normally decline their offers, but today I had no excuse. Can't say I found what the appeal is, either." He suddenly turned towards me, his smile warm. "I'm Luhan, by the way."   I was surprised by the use of his first name during introductions exclusively, and wondered if it was because TaeYeon had told everyone I was America when I had first arrived.   "I'm Hana." I smiled back, finding his smile contagious. "Do you go to our school?"    "Oh no." He shook his head, causing his fine light brown hair to flop into his eyes. He pushed it out idly. "I attend the Seoul Institute of the Arts."   "You're older then me?" I blinked, recognising it as the name of a university and taking in his appearance stunned.   He had a baby face, his features soft and delicate, his eyes gentle and a light brown alike his hair. He was extremely slim and quite tall, his smile bright making him appear even more youthful. He was, I noted, very cute looking, and could pass for a high schooler.    "I'm 23."  He answered, looking somewhat shy. "Though don't worry, I'm not as mature as you'd think."    To this I chuckled.    "Well then I guess in that aspect, I'm older, because I'm very mature." I lifted my chin a notch higher in mock snobbery and he laughed, giving my shoulder a slight push.   "Sure, Hana-Ya."   "Ya?" I demanded, placing my hands on my hips. "I thought we est
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joyful_mess
#1
Chapter 37: Just had the time to reread this fic. OMG I understand now why I loved this so much! I'm so happy to see that you are not done with this.
bebebebi #2
Chapter 37: OMYGOD youre baaccckkk!!!! thankyouthankyouthankyouuu
BangYongGukBias
#3
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theblackpearL
#4
Ahhhhh... I think it's been a year or two since i last opened my aff account and this is the first story i looked for in my subscribed list. I really like your story very much. Please do update soon! Happy new year ms. Author :-)
KimMieAhn
#5
Chapter 36: I am so very happy to see you updated I kept checking up on this fanfic just because I really like your story line. Thanks so much for updating. Authornim fighting!
bogusbabe #6
Chapter 36: I came for the Daragon and I stayed, hoping for more Daragon and because this story has got me hooked. I have always been a er for supernatural stories so this was no exception.

Personally I don't know who Hana or Myungsoo or most of the characters in this story but it didn't stop me from enjoying it nevertheless. I like Myungsoo because he comes off as the typical male protagonist. Handsome, mysterious, with the hero complex who only shows his soft/teasing side to family and the girl he cares for. Hana is okay for me as a heroine. Nothing against her but I just like my female protagonist more bad- and less reckless than Hana is in this fic. Kudos to you though, Miss Author, because you have been writing her character quite consistently.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters and how you're gonna handle this newest conflict. I so want to know what favor will Moonsoo ask and what is his agenda. It seems like his hatred for Sandara still exists and I'm so excited for that to be tackled. I think though when Moonsoo and Sandara finally come head-to-head, Sandara can hold her own and maybe find the ability to use her "demon hound" to the fullest.

I hope you find the inspiration to make a Daragon story in this universe because it looks like Sandara's feelings for Jiyong isn't as unrequited as she thought. I think theirs an excellent story to tell especially if Sandara is set to be married off to a more powerful demon but Jiyong is willing to fight for her. Plus, I would like to see Myungsoo's reaction when he finds out his best friend have the hots for his sister! LOL
BOICE-EXOTIC
#7
Chapter 36: OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG YOU UPDATEDDDDDDDDDDD
I'M SO GLAD U DID!
WOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
forgivenessqueen7 #8
Chapter 27: I am actually like so confused right now about Myungsoo and Hana but I trust you'll make a good ending for them :) It's just...very yeah I hope they end up together happily :D
HeartlessRose #9
Chapter 36: I feel like everytime you post a new chapater after a long time I'm out somewhere and end up causing some kind of a scene. This time around I was at my best friends graduation party and I checked AFF and saw you updated and once again, squealed at the top of my lungs. I may or may not have jumped up and down like a happy child as well and did a little happy dance. I'm happy you're back even if it's a temporary thing. Moving and can be incredibly stressful, and to me, there is nothing more stressful than a broken laptop. I feel your pain (I recently spilled green tea all over my keyboard).

Anyway moving past my embarassing moment of pure blissful happiness. I've missed this story so much and as usual you've delivered another incredible update. I swear poor Hana can't seem to catch a bloody break. I hope all goes well for her, I'm sure her having to be killed by that sword has something to do with breaking the bond. I don't want the bond to break TAT I love Hansoo (my little ship name for themxD). It excites me and saddens me to know that this story will be finished pretty soon. It is still my absolute favorite. I can't wait for you to update again and I hope all goes well for you with moving and your laptop.:D Again thank you for the epic update.
KawKaw
#10
Chapter 35: I so miss this story ; ; i read the 29th chapter like a 1000 times thinking and hoping that i will find the "next" button at the end :( I hope nothing is wrong in uri precious author's life, i cant help being worried since she's been absent for ages now :/ Come back soon <3