Story - I Knew

A n a l y s i s

Ti  t  l  e       4   /   5

De s c r  i  p  t  i  on & Fo  r  e w o  r  d     18   /  20
Ap p e a   r   a n c  e       9/  10
Pl o  t     18/   20
F l  ow        10   /   10
Wr  i  t  ing    S  t y le     14 /     15
S p  e  l  l  in g   ,    G  r   a  m   m  a  r   ,  P u  n   c  t  u  a   t   i   o  n       19/    20
O  v  e  r  a l  l     9 2   /     1 0  0

Title: 4/5
Title is short, but a little boring & not much 'feel' or 'emotion' to it.

Description&Foreword: 18/20
Description & Foreword is a bit common with the 'quite girl x player & dating-bet'', but its a Yuri x Jessica pairing & other snsd pairings, which isn't as common & kinda interesting. Your description was also at a perfect length ;D

Appearance: 9/10
The poster seemed a bit plain & gave off a kinda gloomy/ depressed feeling but also at the same time it gave off that 'angelic' glow because of the white.

Plot: 18/20
Though the 'Bet' & 'Player likes quiet, sassy girl' storyline is common in movies & fanfics, yours is definitely one of the more unique ones. The fluff was a bit different & a bit addicting once the reader got used to it.
 

Flow: 10/10
Perfect! & you managed to give each character just enough space in the story! Not all authors are able to do that, they tend to only focus & get too overly focus on just one couple, but you did a great job with the fluff of the other couples.

Writing Style: 14/15
The paragraphs are short & easy to read. The text was large, which makes it very comfortable for the eye. Your diction & the way you put the cause & effects in the story is not too outrageous, its reasonable, even though it's a little predictable. 

Spelling, Grammar, Punctuation: 19/20
There were a bit of typos here & there, the grammar wasnt perfect but everything could be understood easily without losing its excitement ;D