Chapter Nine

Turbulence
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    After a filling breakfast of breadfruit, no one really wanted to move. Yuri insisted that they needed to go explore what resources could be found around their new "home", and so they drew sticks to see who would pair with whom. Jessica drew the short stick and breathed a sigh of relief as she found that she would be staying at the camp; no getting lost in the jungle for her. That relief was short lived, though, when Jonghyun drew the other short stick.     Staying here at camp with that delinquent?!? She let out a squeak as she scrambled to her feet, ready to protest and ask if anyone (ANYONE!) else could stay with her, but at that moment Jonghyun's eyes flicked up to meet hers and she was shocked into silence. It only lasted a moment before she spun on her heel (and almost fell because of the stilettos) and stomped to the other side of the water pools.     He was going to try to kill her today, she was sure. He would be the first of them to turn cannibal. In fact, rumor had it that he had already killed once; some kid at his old school that wouldn't leave him alone, and yet they could never prove it was him. Who's to say he wasn't ready to kill again? She shivered and opened to ask Yuri to stay with her instead, but the tall girl passed right by without even acknowledging her.     It was remarkable how quickly they could all leave, and soon Jessica was left there alone with the creep. She made sure to keep at least one pool of water between them at all times.     Jonghyun only glanced in her direction once, though, before rolling his eyes (how DARE he) and sitting back down beside the supply pile. He pulled the spear head out and Jessica's heart jumped into as she let out another tiny squeak and moved closer to the jungle edge, sure he was ready to kill her now that there was no one to stop him. He only glancing a questioning look at her, though, before grabbing another two rocks and beginning the long process of grinding a new spear head.     After a good half hour he didn't show signs of attacking, so Jessica finally allowed herself to sit down and pull her knees to her chest. She was getting a bit tired (and hungry), but the food and the soft ground was (of course) on Jonghyun's side of the camp and she wasn't about to go over there. As she sat in relative discomfort, her head slowly fell onto her knees and she drifted off to sleep.     She dreamt of a blood soaked Jonghyun chasing her through the forest, vines catching at her feet as she scrambled to get away from him. One fell onto her shoulder and she let out a scream, jolting herself into wakefulness. As soon as her eyes opened, though, she saw a large, bright gree
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3