Chapter Ten

Turbulence
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  Morning came again, and with it a breakfast of bananas and breadfruit. Hyuna frowned at the bananas in distaste but took the one that Yoseob blearily offered her, peeling it quickly and eating it while trying not to taste it. She had always hated bananas, but of course that would be the one most plentiful food on this island. Midway through breakfast the sky began to darken, and by the time everyone was done eating there were dark and thick clouds overhead.     "Uh, guys?" Hyuna said timidly, glancing at the sky in question.     "Yeah." Yuri said glumly, and stood to her feet to brush her shorts free of dirt. "We need to get a shelter built if we can."     "With what, our shirts?" Eli said sarcastically, but Yoseob gave him a push on the arm and a glare. "That's not helping," he said quietly, and Eli nodded and fell silent.     "Well... actually..." Yuri said, and turned to look at their pile of coats. Hyuna could practically see the wheels in her head turning as she studied them before turning back to the others. "We could use our coats. We need to build a frame, though... anyone have any ideas how to start?" She looked pointedly at Yoseob and Yixing; those two always seemed so resourceful and handy that if anyone knew how to make a frame, it would be them.     To everyone's surprise, though, Jessica slowly raised her hand. "I... was a girl scout? In the States? I earned my camping badge?"     'Enough of the questions?' Hyuna thought sarcastically, but didn't say anything as Yuri nodded happily and Jessica began to describe what kind of sticks they needed to find. Everyone stared for a moment until Yuri clapped her hands together sharply to catch their attention. "What are we waiting for? Go get sticks!"     "Yeah, fetch," Jonghyun muttered as he stood to his feet, and Hyuna had to hold back her laugh. It was pretty true; she had never felt more like a dog than right now, playing fetch for Jessica's whims. Despite this, she stood and moved off with the others, in search of the right kind of sticks for their shelter.     Soon everyone was back, all dragging long and thick sticks with them. It was already sprinkling rain by the time they got the first crosspieces up, and they worked hurriedly under Jessica's direction to put up the rest of the crosspieces and then sticks laced across the top to hold the crosspieces upright and the coats above them. Once to was all completed, Hyuna had to admit that it was one of the ugliest 'buildings' she had even seen. Eli and Yuri had put the coats on the top and arranged them, Yuri sitting on Eli's shoulders to reach the new 'ceiling', but now it was a patchwork of open coats on top of sticks.      "Beautiful," Hyuna said dryly, and Yoseob glanced at her with a grin. "It's... something, at least!" He said, just as the rain started to pour harder. Ducki
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3