Chapter Five

Turbulence
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  Yoseob was again the first person up, waking everyone else in turn so that they could discuss the plans for the day. They ate a breakfast of papayas, everyone smart enough to not complain about having the same thing as last night; at least it was food. Insoo took his ration of the sweet fruit with a smile and had just settled back to eat when a flicker of surprise went over Yoseob's face.      "What's this?" He asked, holding up a long, slender stone with some of the khakhi straps attached to it. "A spear? Did you do this?" He motioned to Yixing, and the other boy nodded quietly and continued to eat, eyes on his food and barely ackowledging anything else. "Huh." Yoseob grunted, studying the rough spearhead before placing it beside him to finish his breakfast. "Can you make more of these?"     Yixing nodded quietly, and Insoo could barely contain the excitement of a possible catch of fish. He lanced again at Yixing and noticed that his hands were red and raw from scraping the spearhead into shape, and he got to his feet to quietly dig through the coats lying with the supplies. Pulling a small white bundle from the pocket of his own coat, he held it out to Yixing with a smile.      The Chinese boy looked at it, confusion written on his face as he waited for an explanation. "Gloves," Insoo said, motioning at Yixing's hands. "To help you make the spearheads." After a brief hesitation, the other took the proffered bundle and unfloded it, revealing soft cotton gloves. He flashed a quick smile at Insoo, along with a mumbled thanks, and Insoo couldn't help but think that the momentary dimple was the cutest thing in the world.     ******************************************************************************     Jessica stumbled along behind Eli and Yuri, the heels of her boots catching in the sand and nearly throwing her face first into it with every step. She was so tempted to take them off as Yuri and Eli had, but she had never walked barefoot in her life and wasn't yet ready to; the certainty that she would have to take the boots off sooner or later was already scary enough. Her best friend JiEun had given her the boots for Christmas, only a month ago. Jessica felt as if giving them up would
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3