Chapter Fourteen

Turbulence
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Eli woke to an incessant clacking noise. Getting to his feet, he looked over to see Yoseob messing with the coconuts. Yoseob smiled at him. “Good morning! I’m working on the coconuts…as you can see, but they won’t open.” His expression turned from cheerful to pouty, which made Eli blush. Yoseob was cute.    Yixing glanced at them, and did a double take when he saw that Yoseob was trying to crack open a coconut with a stick and rock. That was SO not going to work. “Hey, do you want that open? Sticks and stones are not going to do the trick.” He laughed. “Give me that.” Yoseob shrugged and handed it to him. Yixing took the coconut and threw it on the ground. After two more throws, it cracked open. Yixing picked it up with a smirk on his face.  Eli shook his head, impressed.   Yoseob grinned. “Thanks, Yixing. That was a good idea.” Yixing nodded. “It was common sense.” Yoseob chose not to reply, but simply began scooping out the fleshy fruit. When Eli started helping him, Yixing glanced at them and got up to do something else. He turned back to Yoseob. “That will dry best if you lay it out in the sun, by the way.” Yoseob smiled at him. “Thanks. I’ll do that.” Eli glanced at him. He liked the older boy’s attitude, and was beginning to think that he might be developing something beyond friendship. That was completely foreign to him, since he was interested in girls, and had never looked at another guy the way he looked at Yoseob. It was still baffling. Jonghyun walked up to Yoseob and Eli, glancing between the two. “Hey, would you guys like to go with me to cut some bamboo? We need it to make some…home improvements.” Yoseob glanced at Yixing, who was busy with the coconuts that he had taken over. The Chinese boy was lost in his own little world. “Sure! We’ll go with you.” He looked at Eli, who nodded.   The three of them set out to try and cut down some bamboo. They had found that it was very tough, but were going to make it work for them. Cutting down tree after tree, their muscles were aching within the hour. Yoseob couldn’t help watc
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3