Chapter Six

Turbulence
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Yoseob woke before everyone, but he was already getting used to that. In the light hours of the morning he stood and surveyed their meager supplies, sick with the knowledge that if they didn't find fresh water soon then they would die. They had all begun to search the island in small groups, but no one had pushed further inland, afraid of what they might find or afraid of getting lost. Today he determined to go until he found water; their lives literally depended on it.      With a deep sigh he rose to his feet, and after grabbing a bundle of cloth strips he turned toward the jungle. A hand caught his wrist, though, and he looked down to see Eli looking at him questioningly. "Where are you going?" He whispered, staying quiet so as to not wake the others. "To find water," Yoseob answered, and after just a moment Eli jumed to his feet and took the strips from Yoseob's hand. "I'll come with you," he said, and set off before the shorter boy could resist. He tried to hide a sigh as he followed Eli; he knew it was smart to search in pairs but he didn't really want to be stuck with a pompous jerk all day.     Oh well.     They entered the jungle at a spot where the underbrush was thinner than usual, and after about an hour of hiking, Yoseob noticed that it had thinned out even more to reveal a path of sorts. He wondered out loud what had made the path, and Eli shrugged with indifference. "Does it matter?" He said, and Yoseob fought to keep from rolling his eyes as he answered. "Well, yes... is it a human trail or an animal one? Is this island inhabited?"     "Yeah, by us," Eli replied and this time Yoseob did roll his eyes, pushing past the stocky boy to take the lead. The idiot probably didn't even know what habitat meant. They spent the next few hours in silence, the hunger and thirst growing as they still found no water. Yoseob could hear Eli's breathing begin to grow a bit strained, mirroring his own, and so he stopped and pulled his intended lunch out of his pocket, offering the papaya to the other boy. Eli took it gratefully and split it in two, handing half back to a surprised Yoseob.     Catching the look of shock on the other's face, Eli rolled his eyes and laughed, a bitter sound that seemed loud in the silence. "You don't have to look at me like I'm some sort of monster," he said, and Yoseob cocked his head to the side to study Eli's features as he stared at the ground. "I'm not... cruel."     "You sure seemed it back at school," Yoseob found himself answering, a bit irritated that Eli was playing the 'innocent' card even though everyone knew he was anything but. "Picking fights and bullying others. You're right, that's not cruel at all." The sarcasm was thick in his voice as he finished speaking.     Eli rolled his eyes again as he wiped his mouth on the sleeve of his t-shirt. "Oh, like you're so perfect. You've always been a two-faced little , acting all nice and sweet to everyone but laughing about them behind their backs. Don't ev
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3