Chapter Twelve

Turbulence
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The next several weeks went by quickly, with everyone getting sick of eating fish and bananas. There comes a time when there are so many ways you can cook them, and everyone had run out of ideas.     Hyuna finally got tired of hearing almost everyone go on about how they were sick of eating fish and bananas. She hadn’t mentioned that she did like bananas AT ALL, and was instead eating them gladly. Pasty, icky gooiness, no matter how you cooked them.    Turning to Yoseob, she smiled. “I’m going to go see if I can find some other food,” she frowned. “Somewhere…There has to be something else out there.”   Eli chuckled. “Yeah…maybe some grass, but we’re not animals.”   Jessica glared at him. “Well, we haven’t exactly been eating like kings and queens, with the bananas and fish, day in and day out. Grass might sound good, right now.”   Eli laughed again, glancing at her. “Okay, princess. Whatever you say.” Jessica shot him another glare, and opened to retort, but was interrupted by Hyuna, who rolled her eyes. This ordeal was getting to everyone’s nerves. “Look…I’m going to go find some other food," she repeated the statement she had just made a few minutes ago. "Would anyone like to go with me?”   Yuri grinned, glancing at "barbie" Jessica. “I’ll go with you. I’m hungry, too. Let’s go.”   Hyuna smiled at her. "Thanks, Yuri. I appreciate it."    ***********   Hyuna and Yuri walked carefully, looking all over for something that might be edible. Hyuna got the idea to fill their shirts with grass and various weeds. There might be something edible, and they both figured that someone back at camp might be able to tell if their quest was worth it. Yuri figured that the leaves they found to carry it all in would worth trying, at the very least.   They walked further, and were very satisfied by their bounty.  They began talking as they walked, and did not notice the large pit that was in front of them, until they had fallen into it. Both girls screamed, as they went down, hitting the bottom hard. Yuri noticed that Hyuna was now shaking from fear. Yuri glanced upward, and thought she heard something. To her horror, which she hid so that Hyuna would not become more afraid, it sounded like a snake. That would be really bad in this jungle.   Hyuna smiled nervously at Yuri. “Are you injured? I don’t think I am.” She rubbed her elbow where she had scraped it on the way down.    Yuri was still distracted by the possibility of there being snakes above them. She shook her head. “I’m fine. I’ve had worse scrapes playing sports.” Yuri listened, and heard something rustling above them. It did not sound like a large animal, and also was not moving like a mammal. She guessed it was most likely snakes.     Just great.   Glancing at the top of the pit again, Yuri motioned for Hyuna to come closer. She did, and Yuri held her tightly, on the side of the pit. She also began looking around for something to get out with.    Hyuna saw her looking, and mentioned it. “Hey, what are you looking for? Maybe I can help.”   Yuri smiled. “Do you see anything we can possibly
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3