Chapter Thirteen

Turbulence
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The next morning, they woke up to rain on the roof of the huts. While it sounded nice and was refreshing, it brought a cruel reminder that they were very hungry and no one really wanted to go outside in the downpour. Yixing finally quietly reminded everyone that if they didn’t find food soon, everyone was going to starve; it was that simple. After he had mentioned it, several people started to get ready to go find food. There was no reason to whine about it.    Jessica and Hyuna decided to stay behind, since it probably was not safe to leave the camp unattended. They stayed at the camp for a while, but decided it was okay for them to both go take baths in the spring. No one was around, and they both needed it. It turned out to be very refreshing and relaxing. They also found that they could enjoy one another’s company, chatting as they bathed. Hyuna learned that Jessica was not as much of a barbie as everyone thought. She seemed to like some of the same things that Hyuna did. She was pleasantly surprised.  She felt comfortable enough to mention something to her.    “Hey…” Hyuna began. “Do you know what Yuri’s dating experience is? Has she dated a lot in school? I am asking you, because you’ve known her longer than I have.”    Jessica shot her a questioning look, then answered. “You know, I don’t remember her ever dating anyone,” she dunked her head in the water, running her hands through it.    Hyuna nodded thoughtfully. “Thanks, Jessica.”    Jessica grinned at her. “You’re welcome.” She was still confused, but didn’t mention it.   Hyuna got out and dried herself off. “Thanks. I think I’m going to go back to the camp now. See ya.”    Jessica nodded. “You’re welcome…and,” she paused. “You can call me Jess.”   Hyuna smiled. “Thank you, Jess.”    After she left, Jessica stepped out of the water and began drying herself off. When she was wrapping the towel around herself after she was dry, she got the strange feeling that something or someone was watching her.  Turning around quickly, she got ready to strike the animal that was behind her. Maybe it would be good to
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3