Chapter One

Turbulence
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Eli Kim pulled back his arm and let the football fly, sending it soaring across the crowded airport waiting dock to hit the soccer captain in the head. It was a square hit, and Insoo Kang reached up to touch the now sore spot where it had struck him. Several of his teammates jumped to their feet, ready to rush over and confront the arrogant football player, but Insoo reached up a hand to stop them.      "It's okay, guys. He's not worth it. It's like a little kid trying to get attention."     Eli shot him a glare at the calm reaction he got, irritated that Insoo could play it off so easily. He turned to his teammates and they cheered, congratulating him on the good shot, and it pumped up his ego once again and he smiled, ignoring the dirty looks they were receiving from the soccer team. He looked once again over at Insoo and brushed the shoulder of his letterman jacket as if to brush Insoo off, then with a laugh turned back to his friends.     A few seats over from where the boisterous team carried on, Yixing Zhang quietly sat, black coat wrapped tightly around him, earphones in his ears and iPad in his hands. He read his newest e-book, ignoring the cacophony around him as he immersed himself in the world of Tolkien. Fantasy was so much better than reality; especially if that reality meant dealing with punks like Eli.      Music blasted from Yixing's earphones, the unmistakable sounds of heavy metal carrying to anyone near him, and two seats away from him Jonghyun Lee gave him an unimpressed look. Jonghyun had only agreed to go on this stupid school trip because his mom gave him no choice. She signed him up for it, packed his things, and even forced his father to take him to the airport. Jonghyun could still see his father watching him to make sure he actually got on the plane, and so he slumped further in his seat and shoved his hands in the pockets of his leather coat, fiddling with his lighter and cigarettes. Wintertime in Seoul was no joke, and he found himself wishing he had worn something warmer. They were going to Hawaii, though, and it would be warm there. All he had to do was brave the weather until then. He heard giggling girls approaching the seats back to back with his, and he barely controlled the snort of contempt as he glanced over his shoulder to give them a glare, warning them to not sit there.     Of course they listened to his warning; he was one of the most badass
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3