Chapter Fifteen

Turbulence
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As soon as it was light, Yuri decided to go for a short walk to see how well her legs would hold up. She was tired of feeling worthless, and maybe this would help her to gain some mobility. She stopped, laughing to herself. She sounded like an old lady, and that HAD to change. Wincing as she stretched her legs, she was determined to finish this walk, no matter how much pain she was in.    She looked at her surroundings as she walked. The island really was beautiful, with the water and the lush, green trees and grass. It would have been a nice place to visit. Now it may be the last place they would see. With a heavy heart, she wondered how many times the others had lost sleep like she had, thinking about never going home.    Sighing, she took another step, but lost her footing on the mud. Falling backward, she yelled as pain shot up her leg. Feeling the stress from the entire situation and now the pain added to it, she began to cry. Everything was so hopeless. She continued crying, shaking with sobs, and did not stop when she felt a hand on her shoulder. It felt small, gentle and comforting. Turning slightly, she saw that it was Hyuna and buried her face in the other girl’s shoulder. Hyuna her hair and rocked her back and forth. Yuri felt her heart beating faster, just like in the pit.   Once she had gained a bit of composure, Yuri turned to Hyuna. “I’m sorry…I feel so worthless. I’m not help to anyone like this, and…I don’t even know if we will ever make it home. Right now, I just feel like giving up, Hyuna.” She shook her head.   Hyuna smiled at her, still her hair. “Well, while I think we are all feeling the stress that we may never make it home, we can only do our best,” she wiped a tear of her own away. “However, I don’t think you are weak at all. You are strong, confident, very athletic and resourceful,” Hyuna could see that Yuri was now blushing, which was to her advantage. “
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3