Chapter Seven

Turbulence
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    The night had the makings of being very uncomfortable; the only words that they had spoken throughout the day had been argumentative or apologies. To be honest, Eli didn't know much of anything about Yoseob. Of course, he knew WHO Yoseob was; he was involved in everything from drama club to the school newspaper and even class president a few years ago, and just about the most well-known person in their entire high school. Eli also knew of what Kikwang had told him, of how Yoseob and Kikwang had been neighbors and best friends all the way from kindergarten through junior high, up until the betrayal. Kikwang never spoke much about it, but after three years on the same team he and Eli had become close and he finally explained what had happened. Seeing Yoseob's reaction when Eli mentioned it, though, was not nearly as satisfactory as he thought it would have been; instead, the pain that had flashed across the shorter boy's face and filled his eyes with tears had cut Eli to the bone, making him sorry he had brought it up in the first place. But no matter how many times Eli apologized, Yoseob simply shook it off and said nothing in return.   And so they sat, uncomfortable on the rocks (because they didn't dare sit in the bush for fear of snakes) and awkward with each other, silence reigning and refusing to meet the other's glances. Yoseob had crossed his arms over his knees and laid his head down on top of them to try and sleep, but the cramping of his lower back was obviously uncomfortable as he shifted for the millionth time. Finally Eli had had enough, and cleared his throat to break the shroud of silence around them. "Uh... look. We're both uncomfortable and we both need sleep. What do you say we sit back to back? We can support the other that way and maybe catch some shuteye... what'dya say?"   Silence met his offer for what seemed forever, and then Yoseob shifted until his back was facing Eli. "Okay," he mumbled, and with a sigh of relief Eli scooted over until he felt his shoulder blades connect with Yoseob's. The shorter boy oddly let out a slight shiver, though it was anything but cold, but Eli ignored it and promptly dropped off to sleep.   The following morning he woke with Yoseob's head on his shoulder, eyes closed peacefully and breathing deep in sleep. Eli watched him for a moment, studying his features before moving his shoulder a bit to joggle the other boy into wakefulness.   "Oh, um," Yoseob started, edging away and a faint blush creeping over his cheeks, and Eli squashed hard on the thought that Yoseob was kind of cute when he was embarrassed (where did that come from?!?). Standing quickly to try and ignore that random and weird thought, Eli brushed his pants (relatively) clean and looked back to the other boy to see that he had regained his composure.    "One of us needs to head back," Yoseob said, if a bit too quickly, and Eli shrugged in response. There was an odd tension between them that was very unli
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3