Chapter Eight

Turbulence
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The trip back to the newfound water didn't take as long this time, and so they arrived at their destination a good two hours before the sun set. The shadows were getting long, though, and Hyuna kept casting careful glances into the dark places, wary of snakes or other animals. They saw nothing, though, and at the sight of their new home she squealed with delight. Yoseob had spent most of the day clearing the area of any brush and vines, and now the three pools were surrounded by a large area of deep brown soil, soft and plush and not a snake in sight.     "Wow! It's beautiful!" She gasped, eyes darting here and there, trying to take in all the sights. Then her eyes found the water, and she suddenly realized how thirsty she had been. "Oh," she half whispered, and sank to her knees to gather handfuls of water to quench her thirst. All around her the others were doing the same, relieved to have pure water for the first time in days. As she sat back on her heels, reveling in the taste of the water, she saw Eli approach Yoseob and give him a light shove. Yoseob glared at him and said something in return, but Hyuna could tell that whatever it was, the shorter boy hadn't meant it. They seemed... comfortable. Well, not exactly, but more... friendly. Odd. She couldn't help but wonder what had happened, especially when Eli turned away to speak with Jonghyun, and Yoseob's eyes followed him closely.     Yoseob quickly took the lead again, telling them all how to pick a spot for sleeping and directing them all in helping to find sticks and dried brush for their campfire. They had a dinner of bananas, which had never been one of Hyuna's favorite foods (but she wasn't about to complain), and then settled in to sleep. The night was colder here in the jungle than it had been on the beach, and Hyuna found herself wishing for her bed. If only she hadn't allowed Suzy to talk her into going on this trip...      Suzy. The thought of her friend made her feel sick and she determinedly diverted her mind to a safer topic. She didn't want to spend the night dreaming about her best friend's death. And so she grabbed her coat from the supply pile and settled it over herself like a blanket, tucked her chin to her chest, and fell asleep, the inevitable dreams of the crash welcoming her into their embrace.       *******************    
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3