Chapter Sixteen

Turbulence
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“You know, I know you guys have been trying to make me feel better, but…I still feel useless,” Yuri frowned, staring at the few huts they had started making. They were functional, but she still felt bad that she had not been able to help build any. All she had been able to do was help Yoseob with the cooking and other little things anyone needed. Lame…    Hyuna smiled at her, then glanced at Jessica, who was working on something strange. She found it safest to not ask about it until she was done. She touched Yuri lightly on the arm. “Well, I’ll stay and keep you company, even though I don’t see you as useless.” She grinned when she saw that she had caused Yuri to blush. She looked cute when she was embarrassed.    Jessica looked at them from where she was working on her latest mysterious project. “You guys could help me, if you want. I’m trying to make some pillows…”   Hyuna laughed. “I don’t know where you come up with all your great ideas, but I am certainly are glad you do.” She and Yuri began helping Jessica with her pillows. Hyuna grinned at them both. “I guess with the guys gone, we are just the women-folk.”    Jessica grinned back at her, but Yuri did not look too amused. She still felt like she could not be much help, and her sense of humor was not that good, at the moment. Hyuna noticed that Yuri had not seemed amuse, so Hyuna put the grass she was currently tearing up for Jessica’s pillows, showing as much aegyo as she could. She just hoped it would help to cheer Yuri up.    Yuri finally laughed, them grinned. “You’re cute.” Yuri leaned over and kissed Hyuna.    Jessica stared at them, shocked.  “Wait…have I been missing something? Since when?” She was grinning at them. “Really?”   Hyuna noticed that Yuri had tried to find something else to do. She was embarrassed again. She took the other girl’s hand gently. “So? Do you have a problem with it?” She smiled at Jessica, looking cocky.    Jessica shook her head. “Not at all. I am just surprised. You two look good together. I think it’s cool.”   Hyuna smiled again. “Cool.”   They worked in silence for a moment, until Jessica broke it. “You know…I kind of like Jo
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3