Chapter Three

Turbulence
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  The tug on his life jacket came from nowhere, pulling Insoo out of his daydream and back to reality. The rocking motion of the sea was like a dangerous lullaby, trying to soothe him to sleep so it could claim his life in return. His muscles ached from the swim the night before; he had gotten as far from the crash site as possible so as to avoid being pulled under, and now his entire body felt as if he had pulled a semi truck up a mountain. Looking around him, he counted the bobbing people around him; only six others. Another glance toward one of them, though, showed him that another survivor clung to the back of someone’s life jacket, holding for dear life as they shared one float. Insoo felt a pang as he tried to recognize the faces around him; none of his friends had survived. Tears began the slide down his cheeks but he struggled to keep calm; now was not the time to break down. That could come when they were rescued.     If they were rescued. He had a serious doubt that would happen; they had been a good four or five hours into their flight when the engines blew. The chances of anyone actually finding them out here in the middle of the ocean were slim to none.     He focused again on the person floating in front of him; the one tying something to his life jacket. He couldn’t remember the guy’s name, but he knew his reputation. He had beaten up a teacher before he transferred to their school, or so the rumors went. All Insoo could be sure of about the guy was that he finished tying the nylon rope to Insoo’s jacket and gave him a thumbs up sign. “We’re all tied together,” he said quietly, voice deeper than Insoo would have expected. “This way we won’t be separated.”     ‘So we can watch each other die slowly,’ Insoo thought, but shook his head to clear the morbid image and croaked a thank you at the guy.     They floated for several days, drifting in and out of consciousness, thirst and hunger a growing problem. Tempers flared often, and one girl would NOT stop crying (though no one could really blame her and so didn’t say a word), and by the third day in the water Insoo was wondering if drowning at the crash site wouldn’t have been a kinder fate. He was considering how to go about untying himself from the others to just end it all when a wave smacked him right in the face.     “What the…” he sputtered, spitting sea water out of his mouth and shaking his head to clear his vision. That wave had come out of nowhere; the sky was clear blue and there was no storm in sight. He went back to considering the knot on his life jacket when a cry rose from one of the girls.      “Land!”     Everyone’s heads snapped around to look at where she pointed, and sure enough, tropical trees rose above the water line, beckoning them to rest their tired limbs. The girl without a life jacket (the only one not tied to the rest) suddenly released whomever it was she was holding onto and started swimming for that blessed sight, strong cutting through the water. In
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Mischief_Management
#1
Chapter 18: This was really... lovely
it was just wow
that unique combinations and the problems they survived though, this was just a fabulous story!
smilehaha
#2
Chapter 18: SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very beautiful story. Oh my...*starts to tear up*
Even though its or yuri, this is one of the most unique and beautiful story I have ever read. T_T
It's like a real story. I can imagine it clearly and once,I thought it's real.
Good job!! *thumbs up*
-Yuan-
#3
Chapter 18: You did it!
You finished it ♥
Congratulation <3
ironically the last chapter was the best chapter and it made me very sad to say goodbie to this story.
You improved whith each chapter so much I'm really porud of you and being able to see your imrpovement as well.
I can see how much work and passion you put into and I wanted to thank you for this because I really loved this story and feared and hoped with the character.
So very well done <3
I hope to read soon more from you.
If you keep in the level of this chapter I'm sure you will soon be a known writer <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 18: *sobs*
Nice story, good job *sobs more*
Panda_Derp
#5
Chapter 17: Oh noooooooo~
Please update sooon^^
-Vixxen-
#6
Chapter 16: Awwwwe. yuri and hyuna. the slingshots were pretty creative too.
-Vixxen-
#7
Chapter 14: Omg this was really good you seem much more comfortable now. it's alright. we don't bite.......hard ;)
-Yuan-
#8
Chapter 14: The chapter was much better than the last one. i see you getting into it by now. It's not stiff or emotionles sanymore.
But I'm a bit confused, about where Jessica got her towel, did I miss that?! ._.
and when did Hyuna and Yuri develop feelingd toward each other, doubt, it was funny to read it was a bit of sudden, I think I have to re read the fanfiction ;3
But anyway you did great ^-^/))
-Vixxen-
#9
Chapter 13: I think you're doing a great job but i think it felt a little stiff because i guess you're not used to publishing your stuff. either way, it was good!
-Yuan-
#10
Chapter 13: To be honest it was a bit awkward because i'm not used to your writting yet. Personally maybe because of the long break i was a bit confused about the charackter relationship.
I kind a missed some reaction, it felt a little bit mechanic/robotic to me. Like yuri said:"blabla." Hyuna answered:"blabla"
I mean tou wrote like frowned but it would e awesome if you could be more detailed.
Like at the memory her eyes became watery. Or her smile was unusal bright. Just examples >.< and hinting if they are on good terms or not would make it easier to understand the relationship.

But despide this it was really highquality writing. We all make those mistakes at the beginning. I just thought I will tell you so you can improve. But don't misunderstand i think you did a very good job and I enjoyed the chapter very much. Thank you for updating, and don't worry i'm sure we all will wait if you can't finish it in time patienly for it :3

Anyway great chapter thank you for your hard work and sharing <3