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'Minty Sweetness' Graphic & Story Review Shop [closed]

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Review by Cookie

 

First impression [7/10]

I am not really fond of bright colours but your graphic is cute!
Fonts [6/10]

The fonts you used are cute and they suit in a romcom genre. However, there are two problems — the placements of the words and its colours. Maybe you should put the title closer with each other. For the colours, 'Myungsoo' is too bright but the 'Pretty Boy' isn't. If the latter was brighter, it would look better.
Colors [9/15]

May I guess? You haven't put any adjustments to the graphic, yeah? Like, psd/xcf or colouring. Try playing with the colours and/or adjustments. It adds spice to your graphic!
Another thing that I don't quite like are the very bright colours. Even if it's romcom, it doesn't have to be necessarily bright. The hot pink hurts my eyes and the pink polka dot pattern at the background is dull. The contrast was kinda messed up.
Pictures [10/15]

Myungsoo's picture is like, it's blurred. Sharpen it so it would match the girl's photo. The placements were awesome though!
Overall making [27/40]

The poster was quite empty. Try adding some cute stuffs! Like doodle clouds or flowers (because pretty boy), it's up to your liking!
Bonus [7/10]

I love the font for 'Pretty Boy'! :)



Total [66/100]

Don't worry about the low score. Keep the reminders and the few tips I gave you. Just practice and you're going to be awesome in desgining soon! Come back here someday and let me see your progress. :D I'm sure you'll do well! Keep on doing what you like the most. Fighting! <3

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Jeonsa #1
I've requested a story review~
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#2
I requested a story review :)
ilabya11 #3
interesting
fangjuexia
#5
I applied as graphic reviewer :)
foreverdaragon
#6
I applied to be a graphic reviewer!
tsinaee
#7
Requested for a graphic review!
fangjuexia
#8
I requested! c:
CupieCakesx3
#9
Chapter 22: Thank you for the review!! :)
ARImora
#10
I forgot to do this. I requested!! lol Glad I remembered.