Pounding heart

Entangled by Love

*Young-bae

 

''I can't believe you came to class in time,'' Daesung says, shuffling the cards.

''We thought you'd get a punishment like cleaning the toilets,'' Seungri laughs.

''Very funny, shouldn't you be breaking girls' hearts at this time?'' I joke. He flicks a card at me.

''Guess there's a new girl here,'' G-Dragon says, nodding his head to the entrance.

I turn and notice Seung-hyun heading up the stairs, followed by...that girl. My heart starts pounding. ''That's her,'' I blurt out.

''That's her what?'' Daesung asks.

''The g...girl I told you guys about half an hour ago!'', I stutter.

''Woah! She's a hottie!'', Seungri exclaims.

 ''Looks like your girl already has a guy,'' G-Dragon teases. I give them a fierce glare.

Daesung gets up from the table bench, ''Come on guys, we're late for boxing class,'' he says. We all get up reluctantly and exit the entrance, but I can't take my eyes off of her.

''Hey you there!'', she shouts.

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sweetcouture
#1
Chapter 21: I can't believe its over! Finally got to finish it! Can't believe even till the end those boys were still so bad :\ Poor Seunghyun, I was hoping this would be a happy ending for him but maybe it helped him open up somehow for the next girl. Great ending and story =)
msvickie
#2
Chapter 21: Waaah!!! It's over? *sniff... Good ending! Nice and dramatic, just how I like it, lol. Ahh... Youngbae! My only wish was for you to turn good. But sorry... You're a Bad Boy! =þ
bigbangvip4
#3
Chapter 20: <3333333333
terrorqueen93
#4
Chapter 20: Urgh,I hate taeyang(only in this :p)..I love your story <3
msvickie
#5
Chapter 18: =[ I'm conflicted. Good story.. But a bad YB? I shall grit my teeth and read the rest... Because that's how much I like your story. ^.^ Just don't make him die okay? Lol... He may be evil, but I still love him.
msvickie
#6
Chapter 17: Ugh... I'm YB biased. Should I be mad? LOL. Nooo....! Ottoke! ^^
msvickie
#7
Chapter 16: Eek... I wonder what happened to him. =\ fighting!
hunhanus #8
amazing!!!!!!!!
msvickie
#9
Chapter 14: Getting good! But I'm sad... Poor YB. Lol, forever alone.
bigbangvip4
#10
Chapter 12: I love it so far. Keep up the good work!