Mesmerized

Entangled by Love

*Young-bae

 

I'm running down the street, rounding corners and pushing people aside. Being late on the first day of school after your summer vacation is not a good thing. I got two minutes until the school gate closes. I can't imagine the punishment I'll get from the teacher. I quickly cross the crosswalk and bump into someone, making her fall. I catch her and let her go hurriedly, only making a quick glance at her face. Just those 2 seconds got me mesmerized. The girl with the red coat broke off the eyecontact and kept on walking. I just looked at her, but hastily my mind thought about school. I run as fast as I can, I can see the gates slowly closing. I manage to squeeze in myself through the gates and run to my classroom.

I won't be able to forget her face...

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Going to edit some chapters because of some spelling mistakes!

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sweetcouture
#1
Chapter 21: I can't believe its over! Finally got to finish it! Can't believe even till the end those boys were still so bad :\ Poor Seunghyun, I was hoping this would be a happy ending for him but maybe it helped him open up somehow for the next girl. Great ending and story =)
msvickie
#2
Chapter 21: Waaah!!! It's over? *sniff... Good ending! Nice and dramatic, just how I like it, lol. Ahh... Youngbae! My only wish was for you to turn good. But sorry... You're a Bad Boy! =þ
bigbangvip4
#3
Chapter 20: <3333333333
terrorqueen93
#4
Chapter 20: Urgh,I hate taeyang(only in this :p)..I love your story <3
msvickie
#5
Chapter 18: =[ I'm conflicted. Good story.. But a bad YB? I shall grit my teeth and read the rest... Because that's how much I like your story. ^.^ Just don't make him die okay? Lol... He may be evil, but I still love him.
msvickie
#6
Chapter 17: Ugh... I'm YB biased. Should I be mad? LOL. Nooo....! Ottoke! ^^
msvickie
#7
Chapter 16: Eek... I wonder what happened to him. =\ fighting!
hunhanus #8
amazing!!!!!!!!
msvickie
#9
Chapter 14: Getting good! But I'm sad... Poor YB. Lol, forever alone.
bigbangvip4
#10
Chapter 12: I love it so far. Keep up the good work!