Meeting Seohyun

A thousand Cranes and Ice-Cream (Long Hiatius)

 

Chapter 6~ :D

 

 

 

Daehyun’s P.O.V

 

“For the last time! WHERE. ARE. WE. GOING?!” she shouted again *Why couldn’t she just shut and be patient..?*

 

I was frustrated and finally snapped. “Ok then! I’ll tell you! We’re going to my friend’s place to ask her if she will let us borrow one of her dresses! ”

That probably shut Yenji up.

 

“But what about my money..? I think I have enough money for a dress..” Yenji trailed

“Well , we’ll use that money to buy shoes , if that makes you feel better. We’re here.” I quickly interrupted , pointing at the large mansion that we had parked in front of.

 

 

Yenji’s P.O.V

 

The first thing I thought when looking up to that house was...WOW..... (O_O)

The beautiful large stone bricks layered one by one , the dark green vines surrounding the sides of the mansion , the variety of flowers , pink , red , orange , yellow and blue right at the front of the house....the beautiful dark blue roof.....

 

I shook my head as I snapped out of my trance

 

This girl was obviously rich and when I think of rich people , I think rude , snobbish and mean.

 

Daehyun got out of his car and led me to the mansion’s door , which was a crisp brown colour...sort of like the colour of bread crust..

 

“A..a...are you sure this is the right house..Daehyun..?” I questioned hesitantly

“Of course ” Daehyun replied rolling his eyes.

 

He pressed the doorbell and almost immediately someone opened the door.

 

“Annyeonghaseyo Master Daehyun welcome back....I suppose you’re looking for Mistress Seohyun..?” a man.. possibly a butler said in a very official voice

 

*Wait...was this girl Seohyun who I was supposed to meet..?*

 

“Yes of course Sebastian , I need her urgently , do you happen to know where she is?” Daehyun asked very casually

 

*By hearing them converse I immediately knew that they were very familiar with each other... maybe Daehyun had come here many many times before..*

 

“Oh yes of course , please come right this way” Sebastian said

 

Daehyun gestured for me to follow him.

 

As we were walking through the house to what probably was ‘Seohyun’s’ bedroom , I couldn’t help but stare in wonder at all of the intricate details of the house.. from the little golden swirls in the corners , to the changing colors of the wallpapers as I walked through countless rooms...

“HELLO?! YENJI?! HELLO? We’re Here Yenji.” I heard Daehyun shout , as I snapped out of my daze.

 

We were inside a pink room which was quite elegantly decorated , the bed was fit for a princess... even the table had little golden swirls drawn onto it...

 

“Yenji , meet Seohyun , my friend” Daehyun said stopping my thoughts again

 

I looked up and saw a girl , she was very pretty , fit to be a model.. he brown hair cascaded down to her shoulders and her eye smile was quite cute.

 

“H..hello I’m Yenji , nice to meet you” I stuttered.

 

“Well , nice to meet you Yenji! My name is Seohyun! I believe today we’re going to find a dress for you? Get out Daehyun! We can’t let you see her until the day!” she said enthusiasticly pushing Daehyun out the door.

 

“Now let’s get started” she stated

 

.....

 

I walked into the walk in closet and everywhere I looked.. there were... clothes of all kinds , but what shocked me the most , was that there was a room in this walk in closet.. only for dresses.

 

I stood there stunned while Seohyun picked out a few dresses for me. 

*...I guess my prediction of her personality was exactly...THE OPPOSITE! Seohyun was a really nice and enthusiastic person!*

 

Seohyun’s P.O.V~!

 

I took out only the dresses that I thought that could suit Yenji.

I wanted to make her look beautiful at the ball...it was almost like my mission...even though I had only met her just then...I felt this really nice aura around her I just couldn’t put my finger on it...but I knew that we would be really great friends.

 

I picked out millions and millions of dresses and told her to try it on.... but in the end... it came to three dresses.

 

Two were cute , which emphasised her nice personality , her legs and her cute appearance , while on of the dresses brought out her wild y side , which clearly she had never brought out a lot.

All of the dresses made her beautiful....

 

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Hiiii every one! saranghae0_0 here! ok. So I finished the sixth chapter^^

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azn_but and I love you guys a lot~! <3 :D

 

 

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kpop_luver29 #1
Chapter 13: AHhhaahahha, getting back at daehyun?LOL
can't wait till the next update>.< Who's the people who are draging yenji?Update the next chapter I want to find out who it is^^and i'm new to aff
exo_tic29 #2
Chapter 12: Ahahaha, Daehyunie is so funny, looking at his watch that is not on his wrist bhahahhahaha!Ahhh, you authors are so funny.
And Himchan being a _______....?whoa he sounds like he went a bit far LOL!~can't wait till the next update FIGHTING
chooseme #3
awesome.. ^^
B2utyful-Elf #4
Chapter 3: WAAAHH!! >_< you guys are so cute; I didn't know you always celebrate when people comment or subscribe =) I might start doing that too, sounds fun ^^ Anyway, I was surprised about the trash talk in this chapter (you know, using bad words) It's your choice to use them, but please don't use them very often although I understand that some bad words really help express feelings. Sorry I had to say that, but I still love your story! I'll find time to read again! =) Keep it up!
kpop_fan4 #5
Chapter 8: please update soon author nim
nikki_jay #6
OMG, i love your story update soon author nim this is an amazing story!!!
B2utyful-Elf #7
Chapter 2: Hey there! =) I've had time once again >_< !! saranghae0_0 you did well hehe^^ Some freaky girl coming up and claiming crazy things? If I were DaeHyun I would be all like "NO COMMENT" ^o^ I'll try to read more than one chapter next time! Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapters and great teamwork between azn_buty and saranghae0_0 ~
B2utyful-Elf #8
Chapter 1: I've only had time to read the first chapter so I can only say this much: Hahaha! ^^ My Jong Up Oppa as a meanie? How cute is thaaaattt!! >_< Please continue on, I'll read the next chapters when I'm free again! ^^
KikisxD
#10
Chapter 2: I've read it and I'm going to quickly review it~ (**not an AFF Reviewer, this is merely my opinion as a writer myself.)

Okay so, first I notice some minor grammar mistakes, such as commas. When doing a comma, you tend to do this: "...piss her parents off ,she helps her mother... (etc)" but the comma should be like this: "...piss her parents off, she helps her mother...(etc)". Ensure you correct this maybe. It's not a big deal of course; still understandable. You don't do it everywhere, so before you post the chapter next time, you should quickly go over it to make sure you haven't done it~~ ^.^

Another note is that sometimes you use commas instead of full stops (I sometimes do this too but I'm trying to stop this habit hehe) or put in full stops without a space . Once again, this is just a case of checking over~~ Just go over it; make sure you've added the spaces and read each sentence; make sure it's the best-fitting punctuation. ^.^

Another main thing I've noticed is that when two people speak, you leave them on the same paragraph. For some readers (and myself), this was a little confusing but manageable. Whenever a new person speaks a new paragraph is made. E.G...

>>> "Hello Oppa!" I grinned, running through the corridor where my husband waited.
"Please don't," he began, teary-eyed. My heart skipped a beat and I felt faint all of a sudden. "I have bad news..." he barely whispered. <<<

BUT, even then... it's up to you whether you decide to put a space between each miniature paragraph or not. I tend not to, others do~ ^.^

Another is that sometimes you shorten words into slang which isn't the best thing to do, especially when typing a fanfic... so, for example, you typed "coz" and it should technically become "'cause", with the dash, showing it's shortened.

Well, I won't continue... I hope I haven't disheartened any of you both! I also write a story with a co-author and it's fun conjoining two styles!

Good Luck!