No....but yes

A thousand Cranes and Ice-Cream (Long Hiatius)

 

Yenji’s P.O.V

I opened my eyes, showing the shock in them. * Did I just hear that? Are my ears failing?!* “What did you just say?!” , I asked to reassure my ears.

“Come to the Ball with me you derphead!” Daehyun shouted out.

*Was DAEHYUN asking me , the orphan to the ball?! Wait. Sooyoung , she’ll kill me. No. I can’t*

“No.” I suddenly said.

 

Daehyun’s P.O.V

“Urrrg , ARE YOU DUCKING SERIOUS?!” I blurted out.

*This girl is fricken stubborn , doesn’t she notice that if she declines , some fangirl will come after me?!  *

 

Yenji’s P.O.V (again!) :P

 

He just stood there after that comment , I wonder why he shouted that out... Did he really want me to come with him?!..

It was really weird , leaning on a wall , while a person that you , only met today leaning into you closely. I really only had met Jung Daehyun today and now , he was asking me out to a ball?! UNBELIEVABLE. 

 

Before everything could get more awkward than it already was , I ran away swiftly out the door , running with the intention to hide in the girl’s toilet.

 

Before I could reach the toilet , I bumped into someone that was quite familiar. 

It was Sooyoung.

“Hey loser , so who’s your imaginary ball partner? Or were you just lying to make a comeback? ” she asked .

*Omg. What should I do? I can’t just say that I don’t have a partner.. That will give her the satisfaction of being right and sticking it in my face. Daehyun. Well, I hope he can take me back........*

“Of course I have a partner!” I said confidently

“Well then, who is it Pooji? ” 

*WTF. Pooji? I’ve never heard this nickname before..* 

“You’ll see” I uttered , as I walked off.

 

 

Daehyun’s P.O.V

 

 

I walked down the hallway in shame , as I was just rejected...

*I guess I won’t come to the ball then*

 

“Hey Dae!” a girl’s voice shouted , I could notice that voice anywhere...it was Yenji.

 

I turned around and I saw it was exactly who I had suspected , “So what brings you here” I quietly whispered , just loud enough for her to hear.

“Well , I was wondering if you could take back my reply and change it to a yes” she announced with her hand rubbing the back of her head as if she was nervous.

 

“Wha..?!” I yelled , being cut off by her hand covering my mouth

“Shush! You’re being too loud!” , she said , “Use an indoor voice” , I calmed down by the tone of her voice , which was very peaceful.

 

“I wanted to tell you that I’m going to the ball with you...” she said , trailing off her sentence.

“Ok....but , do you have a formal dress?” I asked , maybe too curiously..

 

 

Yenji’s P.O.V

 

*Oh no...I forgot all about a dress*

 

“Well...No...” I replied to his question , scratching my head lightly

Daehyun looked worried , but he soon lit up , as if he had an idea.

“How much money do you have on you?” he asked 

 

“Around 50 dollars” I answered quickly .

Daehyun looked very surprised for some reason..

It seemed like he was thinking again , but it felt really awkward just standing there and looking at him...

 

BBBBBBRRRRRINGGGGGG~ The bell went , telling all students to either go home or stay to study. 

The silence was finally broken , Daehyun stopped thinking and looked straight at me with knowing eyes , as if he had figured something out. 

 

“Ok then , Let’s go!” Daehyun said suddenly , dragging me by the hand .

I could see a few people giving us weird and dirty looks... maybe they were part of Hara or Sooyoung's clique..

 

Daehyun led me to a white ferrari , opened the door and pushed me in roughly.

“Don’t be rough when you’re pushing a girl!” I shouted.

“Sorry” he said as fast as possible , closing the door ad jumping into the driver’s seat.

 

“Wait..Who’s car is this?! And why am I in it?! Am I safe?...” I shouted out worriedly 

“Don’t worry! You’re safe! It’s my car and as if I would do anything weird to you...So stop complaining...will you..?!” He shouted , his voice slowly dying down slowly

 

“Where are we going?!” I demanded quietly

“You’ll see when we get there.” He declared soothingly , pulling the keys out of his front pocket.

 

 

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Heyy guys~! I tried >.<

I believe I'll be doing the next chapter~ 

Saranghae to the readers and especially the subscribers out there~ <3 :D

-saranghae0_0

 

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kpop_luver29 #1
Chapter 13: AHhhaahahha, getting back at daehyun?LOL
can't wait till the next update>.< Who's the people who are draging yenji?Update the next chapter I want to find out who it is^^and i'm new to aff
exo_tic29 #2
Chapter 12: Ahahaha, Daehyunie is so funny, looking at his watch that is not on his wrist bhahahhahaha!Ahhh, you authors are so funny.
And Himchan being a _______....?whoa he sounds like he went a bit far LOL!~can't wait till the next update FIGHTING
chooseme #3
awesome.. ^^
B2utyful-Elf #4
Chapter 3: WAAAHH!! >_< you guys are so cute; I didn't know you always celebrate when people comment or subscribe =) I might start doing that too, sounds fun ^^ Anyway, I was surprised about the trash talk in this chapter (you know, using bad words) It's your choice to use them, but please don't use them very often although I understand that some bad words really help express feelings. Sorry I had to say that, but I still love your story! I'll find time to read again! =) Keep it up!
kpop_fan4 #5
Chapter 8: please update soon author nim
nikki_jay #6
OMG, i love your story update soon author nim this is an amazing story!!!
B2utyful-Elf #7
Chapter 2: Hey there! =) I've had time once again >_< !! saranghae0_0 you did well hehe^^ Some freaky girl coming up and claiming crazy things? If I were DaeHyun I would be all like "NO COMMENT" ^o^ I'll try to read more than one chapter next time! Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapters and great teamwork between azn_buty and saranghae0_0 ~
B2utyful-Elf #8
Chapter 1: I've only had time to read the first chapter so I can only say this much: Hahaha! ^^ My Jong Up Oppa as a meanie? How cute is thaaaattt!! >_< Please continue on, I'll read the next chapters when I'm free again! ^^
KikisxD
#10
Chapter 2: I've read it and I'm going to quickly review it~ (**not an AFF Reviewer, this is merely my opinion as a writer myself.)

Okay so, first I notice some minor grammar mistakes, such as commas. When doing a comma, you tend to do this: "...piss her parents off ,she helps her mother... (etc)" but the comma should be like this: "...piss her parents off, she helps her mother...(etc)". Ensure you correct this maybe. It's not a big deal of course; still understandable. You don't do it everywhere, so before you post the chapter next time, you should quickly go over it to make sure you haven't done it~~ ^.^

Another note is that sometimes you use commas instead of full stops (I sometimes do this too but I'm trying to stop this habit hehe) or put in full stops without a space . Once again, this is just a case of checking over~~ Just go over it; make sure you've added the spaces and read each sentence; make sure it's the best-fitting punctuation. ^.^

Another main thing I've noticed is that when two people speak, you leave them on the same paragraph. For some readers (and myself), this was a little confusing but manageable. Whenever a new person speaks a new paragraph is made. E.G...

>>> "Hello Oppa!" I grinned, running through the corridor where my husband waited.
"Please don't," he began, teary-eyed. My heart skipped a beat and I felt faint all of a sudden. "I have bad news..." he barely whispered. <<<

BUT, even then... it's up to you whether you decide to put a space between each miniature paragraph or not. I tend not to, others do~ ^.^

Another is that sometimes you shorten words into slang which isn't the best thing to do, especially when typing a fanfic... so, for example, you typed "coz" and it should technically become "'cause", with the dash, showing it's shortened.

Well, I won't continue... I hope I haven't disheartened any of you both! I also write a story with a co-author and it's fun conjoining two styles!

Good Luck!