I think I got him good

A thousand Cranes and Ice-Cream (Long Hiatius)

 

Daehyun's P.O.V

I.AM.SO.DEAD.

"YAH!WHAT ARE YOU DOING?YOUR BYUNTAE"Yenji yelled "I can't believe your such byuntae…I think I know why your so nice to me"She whispered "You just want to get laid" She finished and shakes her head.

 

"It's not-"She cut me off "Then could you explain what you just did?"

 

"Its normal, if you fell dow-"

 

Again she cut me off, "SO ITS NORMAL TO SQUEZE A GIRLS S?HUH?ITS NORMAL?IS IT NORMAL IF I KICK YOUR PRVITE PART?HAH?IS IT?"She exploded.

 

"Listen to me and stop cutting me off"I tried to be as calm as possible "I said it's natural if I fell down and landed on you and maybe accidentally squeeze it a little…"I trailed off thinking about it *Hey, Daehyun don't think about it*I thought not wanting think anything bad since i'm a boy and i'm growing up and you know we have our needs….

 

Yenji just nodded "Are we there yet?"She asked.

 

"Nope"I answered popping the 'P', Yenji flinched on how loud he popped the 'P'.

 

Yenji's P.O.V

 

I was thinking of a way to get Daehyun back, i'm not those type of people of give mercy.*Hmmm, what should I do?*I thought tapping my index finger on my chin "Hmmmm"I hummed 

 

"Whats on your mind?"Daehyun asked me, I just gave him my innocent curious look so I don't look suspicious 

 

"I'm just thinking about what I should do at the ball"I lied but in my head ---->*muhahahhhaahhaha, pabo Daehyun kekekkekekekk~*

 

"Oh, i'm going introduce you to my best friends, they are the kingkas of the school.They're called B.A.P i'm part of the group as well"Daehyun said sounding so proud *Tsk, so cocky kingka my more like bullies and meanies who have nothing to do then tease/bully me*I thought and rolled my eyes *Defiantly going to think of something to get you back *

 

Then something went through my mind, *Hehe~*, I turned to Daehyun who is right next to me "Daehyunie~"I said cutely, I know this doesn't sound like myself but…hey I just want to get him back but i'm not going to do it once but a couple of time. 

 

Daehyun stared at me like I was out of my mind, "I never new were so cute and handsome"I said in a very high pitch voice while rubbing his cheeks gently with my hands, I made sure my eyes were gentle and filled with allot of love. 

 

"Uh-um Of course, did you just notice?I was always cute and handsome their probably way more that you haven't notice"He cockily said and played with his fringe a little *Cocky loser*.

 

Now for main part of my plan, I unbuckled my seat belt, I pinched both of his cheeks really hard "Awww look at those cute cheeks"I said pinching them really really hard and move them side to side, 'accidentally' knead him where the sun don't shine "WHOOPSIES~"I said and smirked *Got you*.

 

Daehyun's face went all read before he yelled in pain "AHHHHHH WHAT WAS THAT FOR YOU YOU ARUGHHHH"He yelled and covered his crotch.

 

I was smirking but then suddenly the car bumped and I heard a big crash, bang and lots of horn are honking….

 

A/N:I just thought I should put some fluff since this story doesn't have any fluff keke~

XD Hope you guys like it keke~ please comment if you want more fluff.(Short chapter I know, I'll make sure I'll make the next chapter extra long^^)Mainhae *I'm really busy and might have some mistake near the ending since I didn't edit that part*

Chapter written and edited by:azn_buty 

 

^^I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter~

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kpop_luver29 #1
Chapter 13: AHhhaahahha, getting back at daehyun?LOL
can't wait till the next update>.< Who's the people who are draging yenji?Update the next chapter I want to find out who it is^^and i'm new to aff
exo_tic29 #2
Chapter 12: Ahahaha, Daehyunie is so funny, looking at his watch that is not on his wrist bhahahhahaha!Ahhh, you authors are so funny.
And Himchan being a _______....?whoa he sounds like he went a bit far LOL!~can't wait till the next update FIGHTING
chooseme #3
awesome.. ^^
B2utyful-Elf #4
Chapter 3: WAAAHH!! >_< you guys are so cute; I didn't know you always celebrate when people comment or subscribe =) I might start doing that too, sounds fun ^^ Anyway, I was surprised about the trash talk in this chapter (you know, using bad words) It's your choice to use them, but please don't use them very often although I understand that some bad words really help express feelings. Sorry I had to say that, but I still love your story! I'll find time to read again! =) Keep it up!
kpop_fan4 #5
Chapter 8: please update soon author nim
nikki_jay #6
OMG, i love your story update soon author nim this is an amazing story!!!
B2utyful-Elf #7
Chapter 2: Hey there! =) I've had time once again >_< !! saranghae0_0 you did well hehe^^ Some freaky girl coming up and claiming crazy things? If I were DaeHyun I would be all like "NO COMMENT" ^o^ I'll try to read more than one chapter next time! Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapters and great teamwork between azn_buty and saranghae0_0 ~
B2utyful-Elf #8
Chapter 1: I've only had time to read the first chapter so I can only say this much: Hahaha! ^^ My Jong Up Oppa as a meanie? How cute is thaaaattt!! >_< Please continue on, I'll read the next chapters when I'm free again! ^^
ChibiMusicStar #9
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Sorry for taking your space
KikisxD #10
Chapter 2: I've read it and I'm going to quickly review it~ (**not an AFF Reviewer, this is merely my opinion as a writer myself.)

Okay so, first I notice some minor grammar mistakes, such as commas. When doing a comma, you tend to do this: "...piss her parents off ,she helps her mother... (etc)" but the comma should be like this: "...piss her parents off, she helps her mother...(etc)". Ensure you correct this maybe. It's not a big deal of course; still understandable. You don't do it everywhere, so before you post the chapter next time, you should quickly go over it to make sure you haven't done it~~ ^.^

Another note is that sometimes you use commas instead of full stops (I sometimes do this too but I'm trying to stop this habit hehe) or put in full stops without a space . Once again, this is just a case of checking over~~ Just go over it; make sure you've added the spaces and read each sentence; make sure it's the best-fitting punctuation. ^.^

Another main thing I've noticed is that when two people speak, you leave them on the same paragraph. For some readers (and myself), this was a little confusing but manageable. Whenever a new person speaks a new paragraph is made. E.G...

>>> "Hello Oppa!" I grinned, running through the corridor where my husband waited.
"Please don't," he began, teary-eyed. My heart skipped a beat and I felt faint all of a sudden. "I have bad news..." he barely whispered. <<<

BUT, even then... it's up to you whether you decide to put a space between each miniature paragraph or not. I tend not to, others do~ ^.^

Another is that sometimes you shorten words into slang which isn't the best thing to do, especially when typing a fanfic... so, for example, you typed "coz" and it should technically become "'cause", with the dash, showing it's shortened.

Well, I won't continue... I hope I haven't disheartened any of you both! I also write a story with a co-author and it's fun conjoining two styles!

Good Luck!
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