Changing POVs
Fanfic PeevesA lot of stories on AFF have Point of Views.
There is nothing wrong with them. I like knowing what the lead girl is thinking as well as the lead boy.
However, what annoys me are random POVs
I read a story with the point of view of my best friend's sister.
I was just like What? What are you doing here?
It can be quite confusing having so many POVs with so many characters!
I desperately dislike it when the POVs change so that a character can just say about a line and a half. Especially when it's with a character that means nothing to me!
You should limit yourself to TWO point of views in the story. OC and Bias!
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