Same ol' Same ol'

Fanfic Peeves

{Submitted by yamuchichan}

 

This is regarding arranged marriage stories and as much as I like them, I agree with this peeve.

 

The stories these days have the SAME reactions!

You should know what I'm talking about.

For instance, the parents finally announce their decision and the lead ALWAYS says something along these lines:

 

"WHAT?! I'm getting married?!?"

"No! I don't want to get married to this guy!"

 

It's really predictable and makes me roll my eyes because I see this image of a whining, spoilt girl.

 

It would be nice to get a different reaction don't you think. Especially one not consisting of those words up there.

For example:

 

"I refuse to marry and I will forever refuse to marry any man you choose for me" I said with finality.

 

or

 

"Argh are you actually kidding me? I've barely finished school and already you're marrying me off to another family!" I shouted, wanting to grab my mom's favourite vase and throw it across the room.

 

Sometimes their reactions can even be calmer you know. Like, um...

"Him?" I pointed to the man on the sofa, "Andwae!" I crossed my arms like a defiant child.

 

A lot of things in fanfics like these are quite predicatable so it would be nice to read something thats unexpected and surprises you.

 

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missgalaxxy99 #1
Chapter 78: I hate it when there r alot of "" word
Example :-
" WHAT ARE YOU DOING HER YOU ING GET AWAY FROM MY ING ROOM AND DONT FORGET TO CLOSE THE ING DOOR ">eh?
missgalaxxy99 #2
Chapter 59: I hate it when the commentators call the author 'author nim'
what ? LOL
I hate it when the girl run and suddenly hit a boy and her heart beats , oh really ? DafuQ
I hate it when the girl is weak and cry-baby
missgalaxxy99 #3
Chapter 50: 99,9% if the fanfics have that scene when drunken boys attack the girl in the middle of the night and suddenly her superman comes and Saves her
missgalaxxy99 #4
Chapter 41: Omg im dying i swear you are something
missgalaxxy99 #5
Chapter 29: 99,9% of the boring school life FFs starts when the Mom tells her daughter to get up cuz she is late
missgalaxxy99 #6
Chapter 22: 99,9% of the ff, the Girl lost her Parents in a car accident LOL, or because her father drinks Alcohol too much LOL
missgalaxxy99 #7
Chapter 2: I agree with you 100%
Mayybelline
#8
Chapter 25: omg this really bothers me as well and it makes me give up on the fic because if they use it too much it gets super annoying. I just want to read fluently in English in my head...
4ever_exotic
#9
Chapter 27: I have two friends who are scared of thunder and they would cling onto me whenever the thunder starts roaring. Honestly it's a bit annoying cause I personally find the sound of thunder and rain really calming. LOL I'm so weird XD
Kayy_lolliPOP
#10
Chapter 78: Man, I was supposed to do hw (thank the goodness, its due Friday), but I stumbled upon this and cracked up on some of these