CAPS LOCK

Fanfic Peeves

So I’ve read a few fanfics like this, where they will have half of what they write in capital letters. It’s more usual when you have stories in a person’s point of view.

The thing is that it sounds as if everything they’re saying is overly exaggerated to a point where I think the character is annoying.

For example:

 

OH MY FREAKING GOSH HE LOOKS LIKE A GOD!
Why can’t you look at me?
OH DAMN HE LOOKED AT ME!

 

Why is everything being screamed inside your head D:

I may understand if it is done for a girl but when POV is switched to a boy, sometimes it doesn’t fit well. The character may be someone cool like Zico or L.Joe.

I just can’t see them fangirling in their head: SHE’S EFFING HOT!

 

Tone it down people. Caps lock should be used when one is shouting. But that’s my opinion. I shall give you an example:

 

“Calm down love”

“CALM DOWN? I CA—I can’t calm down....”

 

Not only that, the presentation of the chapter looks messy in caps lock. It's very flowy when it's written properly.

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missgalaxxy99 #1
Chapter 78: I hate it when there r alot of "" word
Example :-
" WHAT ARE YOU DOING HER YOU ING GET AWAY FROM MY ING ROOM AND DONT FORGET TO CLOSE THE ING DOOR ">eh?
missgalaxxy99 #2
Chapter 59: I hate it when the commentators call the author 'author nim'
what ? LOL
I hate it when the girl run and suddenly hit a boy and her heart beats , oh really ? DafuQ
I hate it when the girl is weak and cry-baby
missgalaxxy99 #3
Chapter 50: 99,9% if the fanfics have that scene when drunken boys attack the girl in the middle of the night and suddenly her superman comes and Saves her
missgalaxxy99 #4
Chapter 41: Omg im dying i swear you are something
missgalaxxy99 #5
Chapter 29: 99,9% of the boring school life FFs starts when the Mom tells her daughter to get up cuz she is late
missgalaxxy99 #6
Chapter 22: 99,9% of the ff, the Girl lost her Parents in a car accident LOL, or because her father drinks Alcohol too much LOL
missgalaxxy99 #7
Chapter 2: I agree with you 100%
Mayybelline
#8
Chapter 25: omg this really bothers me as well and it makes me give up on the fic because if they use it too much it gets super annoying. I just want to read fluently in English in my head...
4ever_exotic
#9
Chapter 27: I have two friends who are scared of thunder and they would cling onto me whenever the thunder starts roaring. Honestly it's a bit annoying cause I personally find the sound of thunder and rain really calming. LOL I'm so weird XD
Kayy_lolliPOP
#10
Chapter 78: Man, I was supposed to do hw (thank the goodness, its due Friday), but I stumbled upon this and cracked up on some of these