CAPS LOCK
Fanfic PeevesSo I’ve read a few fanfics like this, where they will have half of what they write in capital letters. It’s more usual when you have stories in a person’s point of view.
The thing is that it sounds as if everything they’re saying is overly exaggerated to a point where I think the character is annoying.
For example:
OH MY FREAKING GOSH HE LOOKS LIKE A GOD!
Why can’t you look at me?
OH DAMN HE LOOKED AT ME!
Why is everything being screamed inside your head D:
I may understand if it is done for a girl but when POV is switched to a boy, sometimes it doesn’t fit well. The character may be someone cool like Zico or L.Joe.
I just can’t see them fangirling in their head: SHE’S EFFING HOT!
Tone it down people. Caps lock should be used when one is shouting. But that’s my opinion. I shall give you an example:
“Calm down love”
“CALM DOWN? I CA—I can’t calm down....”
Not only that, the presentation of the chapter looks messy in caps lock. It's very flowy when it's written properly.
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