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Fanfic Peeves

I find it odd to read a oneshot or proper lengthy story here where the lead character falls in love so fast.

It's just, one minute the characters don't like each other, then the next couple of chapters, they're all in love and things are getting tense and problematic.

I could understand if it was a short story or oneshot, but even then, the flow needs to write.

 

I read this story where the two characters met and they were having conversation about stuff, getting all serious and they're like, "It was love at first sight for you too?"

 

Le me cringing~
Because it sounds so unrealistic and cheesy.

 

Oh another thing.

How many times have you heard this line in a fanfic.

 

She's different to all the other girls.

 

Or something along the lines of that. And because this girl is supposedly different, the guy falls for her like that!

I physically roll my eyes reading that line every time.

I think, if you put your mind to it, something else can be used instead of that line.

 

Example:

 

That girl. Can't even stand properly. And who the hell taught her those manners? Plus she eats like a kid. Hardly girlfriend material.

 

The lead may experience the same girl a lot of this time, but trust me, not EVERY girl you meet will me the same. There will be more than one girl that it likely to be different.

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missgalaxxy99 #1
Chapter 78: I hate it when there r alot of "" word
Example :-
" WHAT ARE YOU DOING HER YOU ING GET AWAY FROM MY ING ROOM AND DONT FORGET TO CLOSE THE ING DOOR ">eh?
missgalaxxy99 #2
Chapter 59: I hate it when the commentators call the author 'author nim'
what ? LOL
I hate it when the girl run and suddenly hit a boy and her heart beats , oh really ? DafuQ
I hate it when the girl is weak and cry-baby
missgalaxxy99 #3
Chapter 50: 99,9% if the fanfics have that scene when drunken boys attack the girl in the middle of the night and suddenly her superman comes and Saves her
missgalaxxy99 #4
Chapter 41: Omg im dying i swear you are something
missgalaxxy99 #5
Chapter 29: 99,9% of the boring school life FFs starts when the Mom tells her daughter to get up cuz she is late
missgalaxxy99 #6
Chapter 22: 99,9% of the ff, the Girl lost her Parents in a car accident LOL, or because her father drinks Alcohol too much LOL
missgalaxxy99 #7
Chapter 2: I agree with you 100%
Mayybelline
#8
Chapter 25: omg this really bothers me as well and it makes me give up on the fic because if they use it too much it gets super annoying. I just want to read fluently in English in my head...
4ever_exotic
#9
Chapter 27: I have two friends who are scared of thunder and they would cling onto me whenever the thunder starts roaring. Honestly it's a bit annoying cause I personally find the sound of thunder and rain really calming. LOL I'm so weird XD
Kayy_lolliPOP
#10
Chapter 78: Man, I was supposed to do hw (thank the goodness, its due Friday), but I stumbled upon this and cracked up on some of these