Fail! Part 2

Imperfection

Hello, sorry didnt update for long. Aff had some problems and than i was busy with school as well. Lots of stuff to do... I think im gonna fail composition writing as i'm too used to my fan fic format. Lol(: continue supporting. Saranghae~ I need your love so much(:

P.S: sorry for the late birthday... Lol. but i think it'll do((: *Smile always* Kiss me. ahaha random

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Your POV:

"Yah! Onew! Do you want some chicken? I bought it," Eunhyuk shouted into the chalet as he dangled a bag.

"We won't let you in, Donghae and Eunhyuk! Don't trick us!" Leetuek joked as he opened the door. He laughed his famous laugh.

Haha. Leetuek oppa, always so cute.

Behind donghae and eunhyuk, the same delivery man that sent the chicken to the orphanage appeared.

Leetuek ushered them in and Onew collected the chicken and paid the man.

As donghae and eunhyuk settled in, the other members were doing their own things.

Leetuek was watching television with Kangin and joking to each other. Yesung was at a corner reading some comic book while Shingdong and my oppa were chatting about variety shows. Heechul, on the other hand was on his computer playing games. Behind him, Seonmin was watching attentively. The eunhae couple was chit chatting as well. Siwon was at a corner doing sit ups.

"Siwon oppa! Do you do that everyday? It's tough to keep abs huh?" I smiled at him.

He laughed," Yeah, of course! Can't wait to eat though! Onew! Why are you taking so long to prepare? " as he called towards the kitchen.

"Coming!!" he called!

He came out of the kitchen with a plate of chicken wings, he put one specially on a plate and put it in my hands.

ding dong!

"Oh! It's here?" Onew said as he grabbed a piece of chicken and rushed to the door.

He foot the bill and bought in a big box.

"Gather around! Surprise Kiseop and Kangin! Sang-ill chu ka hamnida." he sang with a huge grin on his face.

" Omo! _______, Onew. Kamsahamnida! I thought you forgot sis," he said to me as well as Onew.

"AHHAHHA! Kamsahamnida! " Kangin said as he laughed.

"Oh, so that's what you were doing when you were missing!" shindong exclaimed.

Than Kangin teased yesung that he shoud sing for him.

"Fine, fine." Yesung said than started singing, everyone joined in as well.

After them both cutting the cake and eating it, suddenly,

" _______! Come here! Are you dating Onew? How could you!" heechul shouted in frustration as he pointed into his computer screen of a picture of me and Onew kissing in the orphanage garden.

OMG! This can't be! how did he find it?

"Chullie-sshi! Dont get angry! It's just a small matter," Seonmin said.

"We are date...."

"No! we aren't! We're just good friends" I interrupted Onew. I stared at him, giving the not-now look.

i didn't want to break Heechul's heart, I wanted to let him down slowly, but it's not that easy...

" But... but there's a picture of you two kissing in the park! It doesn't look photoshopped." he seemed really angry and walked towards the door, " I'm leaving!"

"No! Chullie oppa! WE'RE NOT DATING! You get it?" he stopped, hesitated than nodded slowly.

"Fine, than." he said. 

In front of eveyone, he placed a kiss on my lips...

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bettykz #1
love this fic
PopCutie #2
how come no one is commenting anymore? <br />
I feel lonely ;3<br />
but anyways, i really hope that ___ and Seonmin will get better soon!<br />
or at least wake up!<br />
<br />
P.S i reeeaaalllyyy love shinee's jap replay too!<br />
taemin stole a lot of jonghyun's parts but that's fine with me!<br />
although i feel for jjong...<br />
<br />
anyways UPDATE SOON! :D
PopCutie #3
OMG! typical car crash but...<br />
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!<br />
sorry for my spazzing but will it be okay?<br />
sure hope it will! those are some serious injuries though...<br />
but update soon! :D
PopCutie #4
another update! <br />
dw i'm lazy too! <br />
LOL at the pic xD<br />
<br />
updates are so rare nowadays... its sad T^T
PopCutie #5
oooh~ Heechul confessed! >o<<br />
bold thing to do...<br />
wonder whats to happen next? <br />
hope you update soon! (haven't seen any updates in AGES!) ^o^
PopCutie #6
aww... T.T<br />
arasso...good luck with ur studying...<br />
but remember to update if you get any good ideas! >.<
PopCutie #7
this fan fic is just AWESOME and nice jk...lol i kinda cracked up on the inside...unfortunately, i'm kinda the silent reader but i'm quite chatty when i want to be...what am i saying!? o.O<br />
oh well i'll just say to keep updating this ff so that ur fans (including me now) will be happy! >w<
pinknabi
#8
@e-Moniq he doesn't hav a gf. It's just rumours.
e-Moniq
#9
Heenim has a girlfriend?? who? who?<br />
I never heard about this before! OMO!<br />
<br />
thanks for update!<br />
Update soon with Onew in it, 'kay? kinda miss him :)