Fail! part1

Imperfection

Your Pov:

"Who did you invite over?" Onew asked as we waited for the guests to arrive at the private chalet.

We ordered buffet for the guests as well.

"I only invited my Seonmin and my brother. Wait, i forgot to tell you, my brother is..." 

Oh, how i missed him. I haven't been able to see him in a while due to both our busy scedules.

Ding Dong!

"Oh! It shhould be them!" Onew said as he went to get the door.

It was Heechul, Leetuek, Siwon, Yesung, Shindong and Kangin!

"Hyungs, you're here! Kangin, arent you in the army?" Onew was surprised.

"Oh, im on vacation for one week!" he smiled his famous smile.

"OMG! I totally forgot that heechul's gonna be here! We all know how strongly he feels for me," I whispered impatiantly in Onew's ear.

"Oh! I totally forgot too! Nevermind. I got an idea," he answered.

Leetuek started laughly weirdly," What a pair of lovebirds," he said

Heechul looked quite mad.

Behind them my brother appeared.

"Oppa! I havn't seen you in a while!" I called to him as i rushed to embrace him.

"Hey Kiseop! Why are you here? You guys are related?" Siwon pointed to me and than him in disbelieve.

"You didn't know we're related? She's my sister." Kiseop smiled affectionately at me.

Haha, i thinks he misses me, he usually likes to pick fights with me.

During this time, no one noticed that Onew had dissappeared until he reappeared.

"Where did you go?" Yesung asked calmly.

"Ummm... the toilet!" he said hesitantly.

"Hey sis, you forgot that today's my birthday didn't you? Where's my present?" Thats the kiseop i know, always teasing me.

"Yeah! I for..." I was intterrupted.

"No, we didn't It's also Kangin hyung's birthday today! That's what i invited you all for!" Onew smiled as i glare-smiled at me.

Onew! You're so smart!

"So, aren't you going to invite us in? And... will there be food? " Shindong said.

"Oh, come on in! And yes there will be food," I said and smiled at heechul as he looked quite angry.

"and CHICKEN too!" Onew added.

They broke into laughter.

I should have known that Heechul would misunderstand that smile.

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Hello! Im back. This is a kangin, kiseop special! their bdays are coming!! Yay!

Thanks for supporting, i'll try to update more regularly.

Love the pic cute tuekie~~ ^^

Critique, support, comment~ Saranghae!

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bettykz #1
love this fic
PopCutie #2
how come no one is commenting anymore? <br />
I feel lonely ;3<br />
but anyways, i really hope that ___ and Seonmin will get better soon!<br />
or at least wake up!<br />
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P.S i reeeaaalllyyy love shinee's jap replay too!<br />
taemin stole a lot of jonghyun's parts but that's fine with me!<br />
although i feel for jjong...<br />
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anyways UPDATE SOON! :D
PopCutie #3
OMG! typical car crash but...<br />
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!<br />
sorry for my spazzing but will it be okay?<br />
sure hope it will! those are some serious injuries though...<br />
but update soon! :D
PopCutie #4
another update! <br />
dw i'm lazy too! <br />
LOL at the pic xD<br />
<br />
updates are so rare nowadays... its sad T^T
PopCutie #5
oooh~ Heechul confessed! >o<<br />
bold thing to do...<br />
wonder whats to happen next? <br />
hope you update soon! (haven't seen any updates in AGES!) ^o^
PopCutie #6
aww... T.T<br />
arasso...good luck with ur studying...<br />
but remember to update if you get any good ideas! >.<
PopCutie #7
this fan fic is just AWESOME and nice jk...lol i kinda cracked up on the inside...unfortunately, i'm kinda the silent reader but i'm quite chatty when i want to be...what am i saying!? o.O<br />
oh well i'll just say to keep updating this ff so that ur fans (including me now) will be happy! >w<
pinknabi
#8
@e-Moniq he doesn't hav a gf. It's just rumours.
e-Moniq
#9
Heenim has a girlfriend?? who? who?<br />
I never heard about this before! OMO!<br />
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thanks for update!<br />
Update soon with Onew in it, 'kay? kinda miss him :)