Proposal Part 2

Imperfection

He guided me into the orphanage and lifted his hands away from my eyes.

"Sa-Rang-Hae-Yo~" four kids said separately. Even their shirts depicted the words they said.

They smiled angelically at me,

"Onew.... kamsa-"

Ding Dong! The door bell interrupted my sentence.

All the children, including the onew that said 'saranghaeyo', ran to the door immediately. It was a delivery man

"Annyounghaeseyo, did you order 5jumbo sets of chicken" he wore a blue shirt, that had a chicken sign on it, and a helmet.

"Oh! Yes! Here you go," he handed over the amount and collected the packets.

Just when i was about to help him wiith a few packets, a familiar-looking lady beat me to it.

"Here, I'll help" she said to onew.

We went back into the orphanage and placed the meals on the table.

"It's meal time, get into a line and collect a piece of chicken and mash potatoe each" the lady said.

Onew quickly took two pieces for himself and one for me and we settled into another table nearby.

He took a bite out of his chicken.

"Ouch! It's still so hot!!" He screamed. "Oh, i forgot to introduce you to her," he said as he pointed to the lady," she's my sister, her name's hyori, i think you know her, she's a singer too." He said with his usual smile.

Omo! That's Lee Hyori? She looks so different in real life! Plus i havn't been able to track her current look these days, she changed her hair again!

I left my chicken on the table and walked nervously towards hyori.

"Annyounghasaeyo, I;m Lee _______. and i'm one of your biggest fan! I didn;t know onew's your brother!" I said.

"Annyoung. Oh, that's interesting. You can talk to me some other day, go hang with Onew first, he has something important to annonce to you," She smiled mysteriosly.

"Ok, i'm so honoured in meeting you," I smiled.

"Lets go! Let's go! We'll eat later!" Onew exclaimed as he promted me to the back door.

"Sit down here," he said and pointed to a swing seat.

I sat on the swing seat as he walked towards the rose bush that was starting to bloom. I could observe the signs of spring appoaching as some of the flowers started blooming and the birds were singing.

He attempted to pluck it once and winced as he got stung.

" Don't bother Onew! It'll hurt you!" i called to him.

" Dont worry, i'll be alright. Just stay there," he looked at me smiling. "done!' he said as he managed to pluck a rose and approched me.

He bent down on one knee and presented me the rose.

"The day you stepped out into my life. 
I thought It would be alright, 
to love you from a distance of this unrequeited right.

I laid my eyes on you from the past,
for sure, wanting you to be my first and last. 
Sometimes I become jealous with anger and hate,
I just have to confess this, I can not wait. 

I'm no fortune teller but you should agree
My love for you would last more than a lifetime, 
I guarantee. 
A happy future together, that I forsee. 

Now I must go on a bended knee,
Hoping you'll be mines,
When I ask, "Will you be my girlfriend?" 

Saranghaeyo ________" 

"I will," i said, tears started streaming down my face.

I'm not usually the type which cries easily but he is so... this is so... touching.

He than stood up to kiss me on my lips.

Than, i heard a click of the back door opening, i looked up, it was the kid who said 'hae'.

I felt my face starting to grow hotter.

"Okay, lets go go back in jagiya," he smirked.

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YAY!! I'm done with this chapter! Horray!

Btw- jagiya is what a guy calls his gf(:
/thT

Thanks for supporting!!

Critique, support, comment~ saranghae~

Credits to smilee. thanks for helping me write the poem(:

Smilee's link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/17695/poem-quote-request-shop-2ne1-apply-korean-kpop-shinee-snsd-superjunior 

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bettykz #1
love this fic
PopCutie #2
how come no one is commenting anymore? <br />
I feel lonely ;3<br />
but anyways, i really hope that ___ and Seonmin will get better soon!<br />
or at least wake up!<br />
<br />
P.S i reeeaaalllyyy love shinee's jap replay too!<br />
taemin stole a lot of jonghyun's parts but that's fine with me!<br />
although i feel for jjong...<br />
<br />
anyways UPDATE SOON! :D
PopCutie #3
OMG! typical car crash but...<br />
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!<br />
sorry for my spazzing but will it be okay?<br />
sure hope it will! those are some serious injuries though...<br />
but update soon! :D
PopCutie #4
another update! <br />
dw i'm lazy too! <br />
LOL at the pic xD<br />
<br />
updates are so rare nowadays... its sad T^T
PopCutie #5
oooh~ Heechul confessed! >o<<br />
bold thing to do...<br />
wonder whats to happen next? <br />
hope you update soon! (haven't seen any updates in AGES!) ^o^
PopCutie #6
aww... T.T<br />
arasso...good luck with ur studying...<br />
but remember to update if you get any good ideas! >.<
PopCutie #7
this fan fic is just AWESOME and nice jk...lol i kinda cracked up on the inside...unfortunately, i'm kinda the silent reader but i'm quite chatty when i want to be...what am i saying!? o.O<br />
oh well i'll just say to keep updating this ff so that ur fans (including me now) will be happy! >w<
pinknabi
#8
@e-Moniq he doesn't hav a gf. It's just rumours.
e-Moniq
#9
Heenim has a girlfriend?? who? who?<br />
I never heard about this before! OMO!<br />
<br />
thanks for update!<br />
Update soon with Onew in it, 'kay? kinda miss him :)