The Mastermind

Boys Over Flower 2
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BREAKING NEWS: Gu So Hyun, daughter of Business Tycoon, Gu Jun Pyo and Doctor, Geum Jan Di have been reported to be missing. Many says that Gu So Hyun-ssi has been taken against her will somewhere outside the University of Korea’s premises. Although no one has yet to come forward and confirm these speculations, the police authorities have already been on the move to seek the whereabouts of this young lady.

Everyone was talking about the missing Gu So Hyun. So Hyun’s family were not able to sleep or rest even for a brief moment and kept on waiting for any news about her. Even Gu Jun Pyo’s F4 friends were coming over to them from time to time. Woo Bin’s IL Shin Gang was also on the lookout for So Hyun.

                “Thanks for doing this, Woo Bin-ah.” Jun Pyo exclaimed.

                “Anytime.” Woo Bin replied, nodding.

                “Jun Pyo-ah, why don’t you rest for a while?” JiHoo suggested. “You haven’t gotten any sleep.” He added.

                “JiHoo’s right. You need to rest.” Yi Jung agreed.

                “I’m fine.” Jun Pyo assured. “Besides, I couldn’t sleep at all, knowing that my daughter is missing.” He said.

Jun Pyo was in his office together with Woo Bin, Yi Jung and JiHoo while Jan Di was in the main living room with Gu Jun Hee and ChuGaEul. Seung Yoon was away with his F4 friends and was finding their own way to locate So Hyun’s whereabouts. Sung Kyoung, Suhyun, Chan Hyuk, Hayi and Bobby were inside So Hyun’s room, talking.

                “Yah! What are we doing here? So Hyun would be furious if she knew we barged in her room.” Chan Hyuk said.

                “Hush!” Suhyun demanded. “Don’t be such a coward Hyukie-ah.” She added.

                “You know that I AM a coward when it comes to Gu So Hyun, right?” Chan Hyuk replied.

                “Aisshh!” Sung Kyoung was getting pissed off. “Just shut up, okay? It’s not like we’re here to eat her favourite candy.” She stated and turned to where So Hyun was hiding her jar of sweets. “Yah! Kim Ji Won!” She shouted when she saw Bobby took a candy out from the jar and ate it. “Are you crazy? She’ll notice even if a single candy is missing!” Sung Kyoung was horrified but Bobby just gave her a naughty smile.

                “But why are we here, Kyoungie-ah?” Hayi interrupted.

                “We’re here to find some clue that may help us to find So Hyun.” Sung Kyoung answered and everyone froze. “Lately, So Hyun mentioned to us that she felt like someone was following her, right?” She added.

                “Right!” Suhyun remembered.

                “Then..It’s the secret assassin!” Hayi exclaimed, remembering about her hunch.

                “What did she say? A..Assasin?” Chan Hyuk was lost for words and Bobby just snickered.

                “Just shut it, SooHayi.” Sung Kyoung demanded and Hayi automatically stopped talking.

                “Maybe Hayi’s right.” Suhyun intervened and everyone looked at her, not believing that she actually agreed with Hayi’s statement. “The man in black.” Suhyun stated and both Sung Kyoung and Hayi remembered about So Hyun mentioning about a man in black she saw and thought that it was her brother.

                “But I thought it was Seung Yoon oppa? She told us.” Hayi recalled.

                “Wait, wait, wait! What’re you guys talking about?” Bobby was confused.

                “I’m lost too.” Chan Hyuk added.

Both Chan Hyuk and Bobby were so lost about what Sung Kyoung, Suhyun and Hayi were talking about. Bobby was about to ask them to tell the whole story but his phone suddenly rang, making everyone flinch.

                “It’s me.” Bobby answered and there was a pause. “What?!!” Bobby sounded shock and the others were now looking at him and listening to him intently. “Okay. I’ll be right there.” And he hanged up.

                “What is it?” Sung Kyoung asked quickly.

                “It’s Sung Jae.” Bobby answered grimly. “He’s going berserk in our roomback at the dormitory.” He added.

At the Boys’ Dormitories:

Bobby’s and Sung Jae’s room was in a total mess. Almost all the appliances were wrecked and some of the furniture was broken and some were knocked down. Bi, Jun Hue and Dong Hyuk were just standing there, watching Sung Jae losing his mind and breaking the things his eyes saw on the way.

                “Sung Jae-ah..” Bi tried to talk him out of his misery butSung Jae wasn’t listening at all.

Sung Jae was furious. He was so mad. He was blaming his self for what had happened to So Hyun. If only he didn’t run away from her, she wouldn’t have followed him outside the school premises

                “Sung Jae-ah..” Bi tried again and this time and he tried to approach him closer.

                “Yah! Cha Han Bin! Do you want to die?” Jun Hue grabbed Bi back. “He’s in BEAST mode! You’re going to die if you ever try to get close to him in that state of his!” He added.

Sung Jae continued on hitting and breaking things until he felt tired and stopped. He was now on his knees, bowing his head. He was not talking and kept on closing his eyes. Bi and Dong Hyuk took the opportunity to tidy the mess he created. After making sure that Sung Jae was harmless enough, Jun Hue decided to help Bi and Dong Hyuk in cleaning. Jun Hue grabbed the knocked down chair that was on the floor beside Sung Jae very carefully, when Sung Jae suddenly looked up and glared at Jun Hue, Junhue jumped in fright.

                “I’m sory! I’m sorry!” Jun Hue shouted hysterically. “Here’s your chair! Feel free to break it!” Jun Hue immediately gave the chair to Sung Jae and ran away, hiding behind Dong Hyuk.

                “Scaredy cat.” Jun Hue heard someone say behind them and turned around to see Suhyun smirking at him and she was together with Sung Kyoung, Hayi, Chan Hyuk and Bobby. 

                “What the hell..” Bobby was surprised after he saw the mess.

                “Tsk! Reinforcements, huh?” Sung Jae sounded bitter but his eyes were blank.

Sung Kyoung, Hayi and the twins were speechless after seeing Sung Jae acting like that. They never saw him so broken and vulnerable. They somehow understand why he was acting so crazy. They knew that Sung Jae was blaming his self for So Hyun’s disappearance but Sung Kyoung suddenly felt irritated by Sung Jae’s actions.

                “Yah! Do you really want to do this right now?” Sung Kyoung answered but Sung Jae just stared at her coldly. “So Hyun is missing but here you are, drowning yourself in your baseless guilt!” She added forcefully.

                “Yah, Yoon Sung Kyoung!” Jun Hue shrieked. “Don’t! You’re just making it worse!” Jun Hue commented. “Hey! You guys better do something about this or else, Yoon Sung Kyoung will become a dead meat!” He added.

Jun Hue was expecting that someone will stop Sung Kyoung but no one moved. Even Bi and Dong Hyuk were just standing there silently with their serious faces.

                “You know what?” Sung Kyoung started ag

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Rainysuzyyeh #1
Chapter 1: Seems fun, though from what i read about otgers comment made me kind of worried about how you will potray suhyun character, since i camw here only for suhyun, lol
BabyHyun96 #2
Seems like a good fic. Will try to read it when I have the time :D
pinkypn #3
Chapter 40: I wanted to know who each girls will end up dating. I'm glad all their family problems worked out. At least I know Bobby and hayi ended up together. Are you going to write an epilogue or a sequel?
pinkypn #4
Chapter 32: I'm tried of seeing the girls getting bullied and nothing is being done. How can those people keep getting away with it, where are the teachers when the girls are getting bullied. I'm starting to get annoyed that everyone keeps calling hayi dumb even her family, they are always calling her dumb.
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 32: My comment wouldn't fit into one, so I had to cut them by sections author. This is what I get for writing more than 1000 words. Shame on me...lol
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 32: Oh my freaking cheeseballs! I love you so much author! You really made my day when you made that last chapter about Bobby and Hayi. I was literally screaming like a middle school girl. There was so much Bobhi feels there…ah!!!!!

I was kind of mad that Bobby’s teacher would not let his students choose different partners for their next assignment. I was hoping Bobby and Hayi would pair up and paint a portrait together. Oh well.

Chanwoo actually man up and confessed his feelings to Hayi! Wow! I can’t believe he confess to her! However, I was very happy that he apologized to her about the cafeteria incident. I mean, Hayi’s a very forgiving person and holds no grudges. It pissed me off that he still sided with his close friend Yoo Jung. I wish Bobby would have slap her across the face for hurting Hayi. Even though Chanwoo is the nicest guy out of their little circle of friends, I can’t help but pity him. The girl that he likes is interested in someone else. I’m glad he has no regrets confessing his love to her.
Rubybeauty1982
#7
Chapter 32: Suhyun. Sigh, what should I say about her? I’m still pissed at her for treating Hayi badly. I know she likes Bobby, but I hope she realizes that Bobby doesn’t like her in that kind of way. She really needs to move on. I think she would be a great fit for Junhoe. He’s just as annoying as she is and they make a perfect match. Both of them are very selfish and they only care about themselves. I do hope you write a flash back on what happened between Bobby and her conversation in the Art room. I really want to know how Bobby rejected her. I hope he was harsh with her too. That is something I’m anticipating to read!

I’m glad Bobby clarified to Hayi that he “liked her” not as a friend, but as a woman. I know she’s a little slow, but I’m glad she knows that he is interested in her. I was very MAD that they didn’t kiss author. You should have made them kiss! Since you’re editing this story, can you please make Bobby kiss Hayi in front of their friends? Pretty please? Especially in front of Chanwoo too!

I want to read from Hayi’s point of view too. I really want to know what she thinks of Bobby and how she will express her feelings to him. It would be awesome if she made the first move, like kissing him on the cheek, or holding his hand out in public, or doing lots of skin ship with him. They’re in High School, so it doesn’t hurt to show lots of affection to each other since they like each other.

Like I said to you in my last comment author, I’m only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad for saying this, but I really don’t care about the other characters (even though they’re the 3rd generation of F4). However, I do like Suhyun and Junhoe’s bickering. They would be my second pair that I would read from this story. It’s refreshing and funny at the same time. If you happen to make Bobby and Hayi official in the next chapter, these two can learn a thing or two from the romantic couple. It wouldn’t be such a bad idea.
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 32: I hope you’ll write more fluffy (as in cute) interactions on Bobby and Hayi. Please have them go on a date or a school field trip together. I want them to spend as much time as they can together. More dates means more romantic feelings and kisses! , who wouldn’t want to kiss a hot hunk like Bobby? I know if he was my man, I probably wouldn’t let him out of the house! Lol. Although I feel Bobby does not have any experience, he should ask his immature friends for some help. Can you imagine them giving Bobby some romantic tips? Especially Junhoe and B.I? God, I think they would be the worst friends to ask for romantic advice. No offense.

It would be even better if Hayi and Bobby go on a double date with Suhyun and Junhoe! That would be something very entertaining and funny to read. Their double date is either going to be a fun experience or a nightmare. Knowing how loud and stupid Suhyun and Junhoe are, they would probably ruin the date (which is fine by me) because that means Bobby will have to drag Hayi somewhere alone so they can have their “me time” together.

I really want to read more about Bobby’s jealousy towards Chanwoo. I’m still disappointed that these two did not fight in the cafeteria. You need more action in this story author! I know Hayi would side with Bobby no matter what. If there is going to be more action scenes, please write a action scene with Bobby and Chanwoo. I wouldn’t mind seeing Hayi in the background cheering for her man. Lol.

I’m so sorry author if I keep blabbering about Bobby and Hayi. I guess you can tell I’m a huge Bobhi shipper. Well, I lied. I’m more of a Hanhi (B.I) shipper than Bobhi. However, the fact that you have B.I paired up with someone else in this story, Bobby is fine with me. I know some of your other readers will probably be annoyed with you if I keep asking you to update about only Bobby and Hayi. Please try to add a little bit of them in the next few chapters. I know you’re trying to even out all the characters in here, and if you’re editing, can I request you to add another chapter about Bobby and Hayi? I know I’m asking for too much, but if you do take my request, I promise I’ll leave you another long comment. This is how much I like your story (well, only Bobby and Hayi). Lol.

Please update more about Bobby and Hayi author. Until then, I will see you in the next chapter. I hope my comment here will motivate you to write more about Bobby and Hayi. Or perhaps, maybe you can write a story about them. I know I’ll subscribe and upvote your story for sure! Oh, and of course leave a nice long comment too. :D Fighting author!!!
Rubybeauty1982
#9
Chapter 27: God damn! That fighting scene was awesome! Kind of funny if you ask me. I'm going to be totally honest with you author. I'm only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I was VERY disappointed that there was not enough Bobhi interactions in the last couple of chapters (well besides the part where Bobby confessed to Hayi that he liked her), but it was still not long enough.

Please make a full chapter just about Bobby and Hayi. I would be the happiest girl alive. And, I promise to leave you a long comment too. I don't want to say Hayi is dumb, but she is a little slow. I think she mistaken Bobby's confession as a "I don't hate you, but I like you as a friend" thing. Bobby needs to make it clear to Hayi that he likes her more than a friend. , make him kiss her on the lips so she would know that he likes her as a woman! Please do that! Especially in front of Suhyun! Honestly, I don't like her at all. The way how she treats Hayi makes me want to slap her 100 times.

I get pissed off when her stupid F4 friends call her dumb. Hayi should show her useless friends that she's not as dumb as what they think. Bobby will be by her side no matter what. He seems to be a very good influence on her and he could probably educate her well.

I loved the part where he was so concerned about Hayi that he was going to confront Yoo Jung. It's a shame that Chanwoo stopped Bobby. I was hoping Bobby would throw his fist at Chanwoo too. Too bad Hayi and Suhyun stopped him. That would have been epic to read! Can you imagine Hayi trying to pull Bobby off of Chanwoo? I'm sure Hayi would have take a punch for Bobby too. Ah, true love!

Please please please write more about Bobby and Hayi. I shall patiently wait for your next update on Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad that everyone in their group is suspended for a week. Well, I do hope that during their week off school, Bobby and Hayi will hook up, share some sweet kisses, and go on lots of dates! Chanwoo will be upset, but oh well. That is life.

I really don't mind reading about June and Suhyun. I love the way how they bicker with each other, which makes me wonder if those two are going to hook up in the end? I hope so author. That way she'll leave Hayi and Bobby alone. Sigh, I really do want to slap her. Lol. Please update soon author and I promise to leave you at least over a 1000 words when I comment. But please write a full chapter about Bobby and Hayi!
pinkypn #10
Chapter 25: All I know is 3rd generation f4 needs to put yoojung and searon along with their little helpers in their place like how their parents did. Their parents was quick to put people back in their place.