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Boys Over Flower 2
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As soon as So Hyun, Hayi, Suhyun and Sung Kyoung stepped out from the car, all the eyes turned directly at them with hate and criticism. So Hyun just made her expression neutral while Hayi wore a confused expression on her face. Suhyun can’t keep herself from fidgeting and tried to avoid everyone’s gaze on her while Sung Kyoung stared back at the students with her own despicable looks on her eyes.

                “What are you looking at?” Sung Kyoung spat at the nearest students who were looking and talking about them.

                “Yah! Stop that. You’re just making us more embarrass.” Suhyun demanded.

                “Why are they staring at us?” Hayi asked making the girls sigh in frustration.

                “Let’s just ignore them and keep ourselves focus on class, okay?” So Hyun commented and they all nodded.

Each of them went to their class. Sung Kyoung went directly to the gym and wore her P.E uniform for their first period of class. As soon as she arrived in the gym, all eyes went to her but she just ignored them and went to sit on the floor where the teacher was waiting for the students to huddle around.

                “Okay! That’s enough gossiping and let’s start the class.” The teacher caught everyone’s attention. “The boys will be playing soccer outside to the field while the girls will be staying here inside the gym to play volleyball. I will be watching you alternately so you brats better behave while I’m not watching you, understand?” The teacher added.

                “Yes, Teacher!” All the students answered in unison.

As soon as the teacher went out to the field, Sung Kyoung already know to herself that her classmates would make her life miserable during their P.E class without the teacher watching them. She braced herself to the worst things that may happen to her but she kept telling herself that she wouldn’t back down from them. NEVER.

                “Let the game begin.” Sung Kyoung said to herself.

 

Sung Kyoung and Yoo Jung were on the same team and it made Sung Kyoung even more threatened so she alerted herself even more. The game started and as what Sung Kyoung had expected, her hardship started when her teammates started to ignore her existence during their game.

                “Aisshh!” Sung Kyoung cursed inside her head.

Sung Kyoung was just standing in her post not even able to touch a single ball. She was about to give up on expecting the ball and started to lower her guard when all of a sudden a ball had hit her on her head.

                “Oww!” Sung Kyoung grimaced. “Ah, yah! Who did that?” She was furious.

                “Yah. We’re in the game. It’s your fault if you’re being lousy.” Yoo Jung commented. “And thanks to you, our team’s behind a point because of your lousiness.” She added.

                “Aisshh. I would be happy if the first eyes and mouth that I’ll be gouging and breaking would be Yoo Jung’s.” Sung Kyoung just stared back at Yoo Jung hatefully.

Every time the teacher would check up on them, Sung Kyoung’s classmates would act like nothing happened and would play normally but as soon as the teacher was gone, she was being targeted by the balls every time they would spike.

                “Is that all you could do?” Sung Kyoung shouted, unable to hold it in anymore.

                “Omo, what are you blabbering about, Yoon Sung Kyoung?” Yoo Jung went closer to her.

                “You know what I mean, you two-faced witch!” Sung Kyoung exclaimed making everyone gasped.

Sung Kyoung was quite delighted when she said those things on Yoo Jung’s face. She could totally read Yoo Jung’s horrible face. Yoo Jung was definitely furious after hearing those from Sung Kyoung. Sung Kyoung was all smiling now but then, a ball hit her on the shoulder quite hard, making her fall to her knees in pain.

                “Don’t you dare insult my best friend!” Sae Ron was all red faced from anger.

Everyone was shocked, even Yoo Jung. Sung Kyoung couldn’t believe that Sae Ron, the good natured girl she once knew or so she thought would hurt her like that. She could tell that Sae Ron has mixed emotions at that moment but she was overwhelmed by the hatred coming from Sae Ron’s eyes.

                “What’s going on here?” Hyun Hyeong was the first to enter the gym after the boys’ game.

When they realized that the boys were coming back from playing soccer, the girls started to disperse from the scene of action and as soon as the girls broke out from their huddle, Hyun Hyeong finally noticed that Sung Kyoung was on her knees, feeling her injured shoulder.

                “Yoon Sung Kyoung!” Hyun Hyeong immediately ran to Sung Kyoung, kneeling beside her. “What happened? Are you hurt?” He asked and was about to reach out to her shoulders but she quickly swatted his hands away.

                “I’m fine!” Sung Kyoung stood up and went to the teacher to ask permission of leaving first.

Bi and Dong Hyuk were just entering the gym now and Bi noticed that Sung Kyoung was already leaving the gym. He noticed that she kept on holding her right shoulder with a pained expression on her face. He was wondering what’s wrong with Sung Kyoung when he noticed Yoo Jung and the rest of the girls giggling at Sung Kyoung’s direction.

                “Seo Yoo Jung.” Bi started to get mad.

After their P.E class, all the girls went to change in the girl’s bathroom. Just as soon as Yoo Jung and Sae Ron got out, Bi suddenly appeared and grabbed Yoo Jung by her arm, making the two girls gasped in surprise.

                “Yah, let go of me.” Yoo Jung demanded.

                “What do you think you’re doing, Cha Han Bin-ssi?” Sae Ron was terrified.

                “All this time I’ve been trying my best not to get involve in your dirty matters. Don’t let my efforts go to waste, will you?” Bi started to say and the two girls were now trembling seeing Bi’s eyes burning with hate.

Bi was still gripping Yoo Jung’s arm tightly and she started to feel pain but she wasn’t able to say anything at him because she was terrified. All Sae Ron could do was holding her friend’s free hand.

                “Let her go.” Bi and the two girls heard someone and they all turned to see who it was. “Trust me. You really don’t want to do that to a girl.” Hyun Hyeong was standing not so far from them.

                “Hyeong-ah!”  Sae Ron was so happy to see her friend and she ran to Hyun Hyeong’s side.

                “Tsk. Here comes the hero.” Bi commented and she let go of Yoo Jung’s arm. “Seo Yoo Jung-ssi.” Bi turned to look at Yoo Jung for the last time. “Don’t make me angry anymore than you already did. Touch her one more time and I’ll seek you out myself to torment you.” Bi warned.

                “Her? Who’s he talking about?” Yoo Jung was confused.

                “And YOU.” This time, Bi turned to look at Sae Ron who was hiding behind Hyun Hyeong. “I’ll be watching you so you better not do anything stupid.” He added and then left.

When Bi was finally out of sight, Sae Ron ran to Yoo Jung’s side and started to caress her shoulders for comfort while Yoo Jung was now caressing her arm where Bi had grab. Hyun Hyeong went closer to them.

                “You okay?” Hyun Hyeong asked Yoo Jung and she just nodded.

                “What was that? Why did he do that? He’s mad!” Sae Ron exclaimed.

                “Who is he talking about anyway? Who did we touch that made him like that?” Yoo Jung asked.

                “Yoon Sung Kyoung.” Hyun Hyeong answered and the two girls went silent. “What did you do this time?” Hyun Hyeong was now looking at them accusingly. “Don’t tell me that you didn’t do something to her because I know you did and I’m starting to question myself if I should really have helped you just now.” He finished.

                “Yah! Lee Hyun Hyeong!” Sae Ron sounded and looked hurt. “We’re you’re friends! You know us! Why would you say that to us?” Sae Ron was now angry but not to her friend. “Why would you take their side? They’re the bad guys! Didn’t you see and hear the news? They’re war freaks!” Sae Ron was hysterical.

                “Hey, calm down.” Yo

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Rainysuzyyeh #1
Chapter 1: Seems fun, though from what i read about otgers comment made me kind of worried about how you will potray suhyun character, since i camw here only for suhyun, lol
BabyHyun96 #2
Seems like a good fic. Will try to read it when I have the time :D
pinkypn #3
Chapter 40: I wanted to know who each girls will end up dating. I'm glad all their family problems worked out. At least I know Bobby and hayi ended up together. Are you going to write an epilogue or a sequel?
pinkypn #4
Chapter 32: I'm tried of seeing the girls getting bullied and nothing is being done. How can those people keep getting away with it, where are the teachers when the girls are getting bullied. I'm starting to get annoyed that everyone keeps calling hayi dumb even her family, they are always calling her dumb.
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 32: My comment wouldn't fit into one, so I had to cut them by sections author. This is what I get for writing more than 1000 words. Shame on me...lol
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 32: Oh my freaking cheeseballs! I love you so much author! You really made my day when you made that last chapter about Bobby and Hayi. I was literally screaming like a middle school girl. There was so much Bobhi feels there…ah!!!!!

I was kind of mad that Bobby’s teacher would not let his students choose different partners for their next assignment. I was hoping Bobby and Hayi would pair up and paint a portrait together. Oh well.

Chanwoo actually man up and confessed his feelings to Hayi! Wow! I can’t believe he confess to her! However, I was very happy that he apologized to her about the cafeteria incident. I mean, Hayi’s a very forgiving person and holds no grudges. It pissed me off that he still sided with his close friend Yoo Jung. I wish Bobby would have slap her across the face for hurting Hayi. Even though Chanwoo is the nicest guy out of their little circle of friends, I can’t help but pity him. The girl that he likes is interested in someone else. I’m glad he has no regrets confessing his love to her.
Rubybeauty1982
#7
Chapter 32: Suhyun. Sigh, what should I say about her? I’m still pissed at her for treating Hayi badly. I know she likes Bobby, but I hope she realizes that Bobby doesn’t like her in that kind of way. She really needs to move on. I think she would be a great fit for Junhoe. He’s just as annoying as she is and they make a perfect match. Both of them are very selfish and they only care about themselves. I do hope you write a flash back on what happened between Bobby and her conversation in the Art room. I really want to know how Bobby rejected her. I hope he was harsh with her too. That is something I’m anticipating to read!

I’m glad Bobby clarified to Hayi that he “liked her” not as a friend, but as a woman. I know she’s a little slow, but I’m glad she knows that he is interested in her. I was very MAD that they didn’t kiss author. You should have made them kiss! Since you’re editing this story, can you please make Bobby kiss Hayi in front of their friends? Pretty please? Especially in front of Chanwoo too!

I want to read from Hayi’s point of view too. I really want to know what she thinks of Bobby and how she will express her feelings to him. It would be awesome if she made the first move, like kissing him on the cheek, or holding his hand out in public, or doing lots of skin ship with him. They’re in High School, so it doesn’t hurt to show lots of affection to each other since they like each other.

Like I said to you in my last comment author, I’m only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad for saying this, but I really don’t care about the other characters (even though they’re the 3rd generation of F4). However, I do like Suhyun and Junhoe’s bickering. They would be my second pair that I would read from this story. It’s refreshing and funny at the same time. If you happen to make Bobby and Hayi official in the next chapter, these two can learn a thing or two from the romantic couple. It wouldn’t be such a bad idea.
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 32: I hope you’ll write more fluffy (as in cute) interactions on Bobby and Hayi. Please have them go on a date or a school field trip together. I want them to spend as much time as they can together. More dates means more romantic feelings and kisses! , who wouldn’t want to kiss a hot hunk like Bobby? I know if he was my man, I probably wouldn’t let him out of the house! Lol. Although I feel Bobby does not have any experience, he should ask his immature friends for some help. Can you imagine them giving Bobby some romantic tips? Especially Junhoe and B.I? God, I think they would be the worst friends to ask for romantic advice. No offense.

It would be even better if Hayi and Bobby go on a double date with Suhyun and Junhoe! That would be something very entertaining and funny to read. Their double date is either going to be a fun experience or a nightmare. Knowing how loud and stupid Suhyun and Junhoe are, they would probably ruin the date (which is fine by me) because that means Bobby will have to drag Hayi somewhere alone so they can have their “me time” together.

I really want to read more about Bobby’s jealousy towards Chanwoo. I’m still disappointed that these two did not fight in the cafeteria. You need more action in this story author! I know Hayi would side with Bobby no matter what. If there is going to be more action scenes, please write a action scene with Bobby and Chanwoo. I wouldn’t mind seeing Hayi in the background cheering for her man. Lol.

I’m so sorry author if I keep blabbering about Bobby and Hayi. I guess you can tell I’m a huge Bobhi shipper. Well, I lied. I’m more of a Hanhi (B.I) shipper than Bobhi. However, the fact that you have B.I paired up with someone else in this story, Bobby is fine with me. I know some of your other readers will probably be annoyed with you if I keep asking you to update about only Bobby and Hayi. Please try to add a little bit of them in the next few chapters. I know you’re trying to even out all the characters in here, and if you’re editing, can I request you to add another chapter about Bobby and Hayi? I know I’m asking for too much, but if you do take my request, I promise I’ll leave you another long comment. This is how much I like your story (well, only Bobby and Hayi). Lol.

Please update more about Bobby and Hayi author. Until then, I will see you in the next chapter. I hope my comment here will motivate you to write more about Bobby and Hayi. Or perhaps, maybe you can write a story about them. I know I’ll subscribe and upvote your story for sure! Oh, and of course leave a nice long comment too. :D Fighting author!!!
Rubybeauty1982
#9
Chapter 27: God damn! That fighting scene was awesome! Kind of funny if you ask me. I'm going to be totally honest with you author. I'm only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I was VERY disappointed that there was not enough Bobhi interactions in the last couple of chapters (well besides the part where Bobby confessed to Hayi that he liked her), but it was still not long enough.

Please make a full chapter just about Bobby and Hayi. I would be the happiest girl alive. And, I promise to leave you a long comment too. I don't want to say Hayi is dumb, but she is a little slow. I think she mistaken Bobby's confession as a "I don't hate you, but I like you as a friend" thing. Bobby needs to make it clear to Hayi that he likes her more than a friend. , make him kiss her on the lips so she would know that he likes her as a woman! Please do that! Especially in front of Suhyun! Honestly, I don't like her at all. The way how she treats Hayi makes me want to slap her 100 times.

I get pissed off when her stupid F4 friends call her dumb. Hayi should show her useless friends that she's not as dumb as what they think. Bobby will be by her side no matter what. He seems to be a very good influence on her and he could probably educate her well.

I loved the part where he was so concerned about Hayi that he was going to confront Yoo Jung. It's a shame that Chanwoo stopped Bobby. I was hoping Bobby would throw his fist at Chanwoo too. Too bad Hayi and Suhyun stopped him. That would have been epic to read! Can you imagine Hayi trying to pull Bobby off of Chanwoo? I'm sure Hayi would have take a punch for Bobby too. Ah, true love!

Please please please write more about Bobby and Hayi. I shall patiently wait for your next update on Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad that everyone in their group is suspended for a week. Well, I do hope that during their week off school, Bobby and Hayi will hook up, share some sweet kisses, and go on lots of dates! Chanwoo will be upset, but oh well. That is life.

I really don't mind reading about June and Suhyun. I love the way how they bicker with each other, which makes me wonder if those two are going to hook up in the end? I hope so author. That way she'll leave Hayi and Bobby alone. Sigh, I really do want to slap her. Lol. Please update soon author and I promise to leave you at least over a 1000 words when I comment. But please write a full chapter about Bobby and Hayi!
pinkypn #10
Chapter 25: All I know is 3rd generation f4 needs to put yoojung and searon along with their little helpers in their place like how their parents did. Their parents was quick to put people back in their place.