Part 3 - Chapter 24

I Wanna Love
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24

Niel was so comfortable. He loved his bed. He loved the fluffy doona covered in a soft cotton slip. He loved his pillows. And he loved the feeling of a warm body pressed against his back as he dozed. He sighed and smiled, keeping his eyes closed as he enjoyed Minsu’s warmth. He was so happy that he could die.

Niel opened his eyes, he wanted to look at the man that had stolen his heart. He hadn’t really gotten a chance the night before. Everything had been erratic; from the club to their late dinner and even when they had made their way back to Niel’s place they had been so exhausted that they had climbed in bed, wrapped themselves together in a tangle of limbs and fallen asleep. He turned over as carefully as he could, trying not to wake the sleeping man. When Niel was laying facing him once more he let his gaze wander.

Minsu’s braids were free, spreading around his head like seaweed in a current. One fell across his forehead and Niel picked it up delicately, he ran a finger over it with interest before laying it carefully among the others behind Minsu’s head. Below the hairline he had a strong brow and straight nose, Niel itched to trace the bridge with his finger tip but he didn’t, he wanted Minsu to stay asleep. His eyes were closed and the expression was serene, Niel smiled to himself.

He supposed he should be freaking out, worrying about having a boyfriend or whatever, but Niel was too happy to bother. Minsu was the other half of his soul, there was nothing to question or worry about. They would work it out as they went along. Niel knew as long as Minsu was there he could do anything at all.

Niel continued his inspection of his soulmate. Parts of his chest showed with the tank top Minsu was wearing, a tattoo peeking out on his well-muscled pectoral. Niel couldn’t help but touch the black ink fingertips, he traced the outline lightly before placing his own fingertips against the pictured ones.

“I’ll show you the rest of them when I’m awake.” Minsu’s voice rumbled, his eyes remaining closed. Niel started in fright.

“Sorry.” He mumbled.

Minsu’s eyes shuttered open and he smiled sweetly, “Good morning.”

“Good morning,” Niel replied shyly.

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Changhyun sat in the bay window of the café, his face turned up to absorb the sunlight. He smiled and sighed with contentment.

“You look like a little flower Changhyun.” Lola said from a nearby table.

“I’m blossoming Lola.” He joked in reply.

“I’m glad sweetie.” She smiled and moved on to clear another table.

Changhyun turned to face the coffee machine instead. His brother and his boyfriend worked side by side at the machine, laughing and joking with one another and the customers. A warmth spread through him, he tingled with barely contained joy.

It was hard to believe that Changhyun had ever been happy before Jonghyun came along. He had thought he was, but he knew now he hadn’t been happy at all. He had been coasting, existing, surviving. With Jonghyun he was living! He was blossoming.

Tomorrow they would head up to The Peak and visit his parents, they were anxious to meet Jonghyun in person. He could see it now; his mother would become overly clucky for Jonghyun, pressing food into his hands and refilling his glass every chance she got, his father would take him beneath his arm in a paternal way and make a show of welcoming him to their household. Youngjin and Changhyun would be dying of embarrassment but his parents wouldn’t care, they would insist on making Jonghyun as comfortable as possible, making him a third son. Changhyun loved them for it. Jonghyun needed more love in his life. Changhyun planned to be there to provide it forever.

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Byunghun sat straddling Chanhee, looking down at his fiancé with a smile on his lips. Chanhee gazed back up at him steadily.

“I love you.” Byunghun said.

“I love you too.” Ch

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JooHunnit
#1
Chapter 27: This...this was one of the best things i have ever read
Really amazing writing, superb plot- placement and everything was perfect. I loved every character and....it was really spectacular.
IHaveRuinedMyLife
#2
Chapter 27: WOW! Just wow! It's been so long since I read a great, chaptered Teen Top fic, that I almost forgot that this is what I'm living for ㅋㅋ it's just that people don't seem to write them anymore... which is too sad ㅠㅠ
But it also means that I'm incredibly thankful you wrote this story!! I loved it so so so so much!! I'd even go so far, saying it is the best Teen Top fic I've read in... probably two years. I loved your way of describing the characters and the dynamics of each couple. ChangRick was SO ADORABLE in here~~ and ChunJoe were so bittersweet at first and perfect towards the end ♡ as for N.A.P.... it actually drove me crazy ㅋㅋ the moment Minsoo stood Niel up I was literally screaming at my phone ㅋㅋ but it also turned out to be so cute and fluffy and just the right amount of sap xD
so yeah... thumbs up for this!!! thank you so much for sharing~~ (and please continue writing Teen Top fics!! I sometimes feel like I'm the only person with an ongoing Teen Top fic that nobody even reads... it's sad... we need more Teen Top again~~)
chunjixbyungie
#3
Chapter 27: Do i have one ? Rofl . Byunghun can be hilarious sometimes ! I really liked the staring part and the whole what are you staring at.. Why ..because i like them .
Byunghun blushing and playing with the carpet too . very natural ~ he actually confessed first ! How surprising ! It was funny when chanhee said bec you are my best friend lol i bet Byunghun felt his stomach drop . That aside though , I get why he got angry the first time . i mean .. I may too with chanhee laughing in such situation . but the second time i was like .. does he have split personality ?
What angered him in " you better get used to it "?
The part where chanhee thought the doubts would come back but he'd be there to chase them off was so sweet and perfect as a closure ! Really liked it .
And of course we can't forget niel's part . so enjoyable and so funny * thumbs up *
chunjixbyungie
#4
Chapter 26: your brain is fantastically bad at sticking to one project and mine is that way with procrastination , which explains why I just got to read this NOW . I have no word to describe how fluffy and adorable ( Chanhee calling Byung a marshmallow is seriously the best thing ever ) this was ( realistic too ) Byunghun's thoughts about niel having everything he himself lacks and still being scared , unsure of himself .
it's ironic how someone may seem to lead a happy life when they are in fact being bullied .
I'll see you in about four months when i stop being lazy and finally read the next ch .
Dotoriji
#5
Chapter 27: My hearttttt is melting!!! This confession honestly explains so much more why Byunghun was the way that he was throughout the story... his doubts and insecurities. I love how Byunghun was the first to confess and say “I love you” but chanhee was the one to reassure him and really be there to chase Byunghun’s doubts away. Ahhh they’re just perfect for each other <3
Dotoriji
#6
Chapter 26: This is so sweet!!! Ahhhh I love this friendship T^T
Papoufruits
#7
Chapter 25: It felt a little sad that it's completed, though I'm really GLAD it is in a way too, haha. Unfinished fanfics are the worst sometimes... anyway, I love the theme of this story and how you wanted to include everyone's point of view. It kept the interest going.

As a suggestion, I'd love to read more about Byunghun and Chanhee's story when they were younger and how their relationship developed (maybe that's what you meant with "Byunghun's confession story"?). Thank you for this lovely story and can't wait to read more from you! <3
chunjixbyungie
#8
Chapter 25: Waah... Such a sweet ,satisfying ending ~
I enjoyed every moment of it !
Happiness was practically radiating from everyone . Minsoo's thoughts were so heartwarming along with Niel's of course whereas Jonghyun and Changhyun were so cute ~
Byunghun and chanhee ... Well the part when bh thought 11 years hadn't changed anything and not an even eternity will . * squeals *
It's awesome how you managed in just 25 chapters to write a story that's not rushed and not slow-paced either . It was perfect .
Thank you for sharing it with us !
<3
Dotoriji
#9
Chapter 25: I am so emotional omg I can't believe it's finished ㅜㅜ
The ending is perfect they're all together and happy...
I don't even know where to begin how to describe how much I enjoyed reading this story and just looking forward to the updates every week ahh I'm going to miss it
Thank you for making the ending so wonderful ㅜㅜ
Chanhee & byunghuns long strong relationship... it's like I can feel the love through the screen;; it's just so precious;; I definitely would love to read about byunghun's confession! (oh and if you're taking requests maybe about their first time?? askfkskdk)
Okay and Changhyun and Jonghyun can they be anymore cute?!? Throughout the whole story they were just so into each other and ugh the best. Now they both have rings to propose to each other! I wonder how that'll turn out lol
Niel being so happy for his best friends and minsu being happy for his new younger brothers made me so emotional ㅜㅜ those two are the perfect match and just so attached to each other seeing them so in love is so heartwarming like they finally found the one they've been looking for their whole lives~

Thank you again for writing this wonderful story!
I enjoyed it so much and I'll definitely be coming back to re-read it~!! <3
lazyfaceu #10
Chapter 25: i'm crying oh my god i screamed when i saw the "completed" status on this book