Part 3 - Chapter 25

I Wanna Love
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Niel and Minsu ran through the rain, hands clasped between them as they jogged along the damp pavement. Heavy drops splashed down on the pair as they made a mad dash for the café. Minsu was laughing and coughing as he slowed to a stop beneath the meagre awning in front of the café’s windows.

“Ah, grandpa, still slow I see.” Jonghyun teased from the doorway.

“Too many cigarettes.” Niel proposed, waiting for Minsu to regain his breath.

“Shut up… both of… you.” Minsu struggled out. They laughed at him.

“Oh hello hyungs,” Changhyun poked his head out the door beside Jonghyun, “Did you forget an umbrella?”

“Who plans a wedding in monsoon season anyway?” Jonghyun griped, staring at the weather.

All of them shrugged, Lee Chanhee did.

“Are we late?” Minsu asked, finally recovering and straightening.

“Nope.” Youngjin’s voice sounded from Jonghyun’s other side, the tall maknae blocked him from view completely. “Come on in everyone. No point standing in the rain.”

They all filed into the café, bowing and greeting the others there. Lola stood off to the side with Elton and Jinsu. Feng was tentatively holding hands with a pretty woman that looked ecstatic to be there. Youngjin was terrorising Changhyun, while an elderly woman fussed over Jonghyun’s suit, a gentleman stood near them smiling affectionately at the two Yoo boys. A small family of three stood near the booths, chatting quietly among themselves. Not too far from them was a chic Asian man with midnight black hair and expressive lips, lounging beside him was a blond Caucasian with broad shoulders. Niel and Minsu wandered through, greeting everyone happily.

The cafe itself was decked out with bright sprays of flowers and long lopes of shimmery tulle. Despite the heavy rain outside it was almost hot and humid in the small space with so many people. No one removed their formal jackets though, today the heat and humidity came second to the occassion.

When they had made a full round, they ended up standing beside Chanhee’s family by the booth. Niel fixed Minsu’s tie and boutonniere, his eyes glowing with adoration. Minsu ran a nervous hand over his hair, freshly cut the evening before by the groom himself.

“It looks great, sweetie,” Niel assured him.

“Love you,” Minsu whispered.

“Love you too,” Niel replied, eye lingering on Minsu's for a long moment.

They turned and faced the kitchen doors. Someone turned the music up slowly and Byunghun and Chanhee burst through the doors dramatically. The small crowd giggled and applauded loudly. Youngjin shifted though the people and stood between Byunghun and Chanhee, he smiled broadly as he looked from one to the other then to the crowd.

“Dearly beloved!” He began with flair.

Niel pressed himself against Minsu, a warm strong arm coming around his waist in reply. Changhyun leant back into Jonghyun, carefully avoiding his boutonniere.

Chanhee was grinning so widely at Byunghun, Minsu was afraid his face would split in two. He glanced down at Niel and then back at his two younger brothers. Youngjin was reciting the speech Chanhee had given him, about love and hope and life’s journey. Minsu wasn’t really listening. He had heard all the incarnations

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JooHunnit
#1
Chapter 27: This...this was one of the best things i have ever read
Really amazing writing, superb plot- placement and everything was perfect. I loved every character and....it was really spectacular.
IHaveRuinedMyLife
#2
Chapter 27: WOW! Just wow! It's been so long since I read a great, chaptered Teen Top fic, that I almost forgot that this is what I'm living for ㅋㅋ it's just that people don't seem to write them anymore... which is too sad ㅠㅠ
But it also means that I'm incredibly thankful you wrote this story!! I loved it so so so so much!! I'd even go so far, saying it is the best Teen Top fic I've read in... probably two years. I loved your way of describing the characters and the dynamics of each couple. ChangRick was SO ADORABLE in here~~ and ChunJoe were so bittersweet at first and perfect towards the end ♡ as for N.A.P.... it actually drove me crazy ㅋㅋ the moment Minsoo stood Niel up I was literally screaming at my phone ㅋㅋ but it also turned out to be so cute and fluffy and just the right amount of sap xD
so yeah... thumbs up for this!!! thank you so much for sharing~~ (and please continue writing Teen Top fics!! I sometimes feel like I'm the only person with an ongoing Teen Top fic that nobody even reads... it's sad... we need more Teen Top again~~)
chunjixbyungie
#3
Chapter 27: Do i have one ? Rofl . Byunghun can be hilarious sometimes ! I really liked the staring part and the whole what are you staring at.. Why ..because i like them .
Byunghun blushing and playing with the carpet too . very natural ~ he actually confessed first ! How surprising ! It was funny when chanhee said bec you are my best friend lol i bet Byunghun felt his stomach drop . That aside though , I get why he got angry the first time . i mean .. I may too with chanhee laughing in such situation . but the second time i was like .. does he have split personality ?
What angered him in " you better get used to it "?
The part where chanhee thought the doubts would come back but he'd be there to chase them off was so sweet and perfect as a closure ! Really liked it .
And of course we can't forget niel's part . so enjoyable and so funny * thumbs up *
chunjixbyungie
#4
Chapter 26: your brain is fantastically bad at sticking to one project and mine is that way with procrastination , which explains why I just got to read this NOW . I have no word to describe how fluffy and adorable ( Chanhee calling Byung a marshmallow is seriously the best thing ever ) this was ( realistic too ) Byunghun's thoughts about niel having everything he himself lacks and still being scared , unsure of himself .
it's ironic how someone may seem to lead a happy life when they are in fact being bullied .
I'll see you in about four months when i stop being lazy and finally read the next ch .
Dotoriji
#5
Chapter 27: My hearttttt is melting!!! This confession honestly explains so much more why Byunghun was the way that he was throughout the story... his doubts and insecurities. I love how Byunghun was the first to confess and say “I love you” but chanhee was the one to reassure him and really be there to chase Byunghun’s doubts away. Ahhh they’re just perfect for each other <3
Dotoriji
#6
Chapter 26: This is so sweet!!! Ahhhh I love this friendship T^T
Papoufruits
#7
Chapter 25: It felt a little sad that it's completed, though I'm really GLAD it is in a way too, haha. Unfinished fanfics are the worst sometimes... anyway, I love the theme of this story and how you wanted to include everyone's point of view. It kept the interest going.

As a suggestion, I'd love to read more about Byunghun and Chanhee's story when they were younger and how their relationship developed (maybe that's what you meant with "Byunghun's confession story"?). Thank you for this lovely story and can't wait to read more from you! <3
chunjixbyungie
#8
Chapter 25: Waah... Such a sweet ,satisfying ending ~
I enjoyed every moment of it !
Happiness was practically radiating from everyone . Minsoo's thoughts were so heartwarming along with Niel's of course whereas Jonghyun and Changhyun were so cute ~
Byunghun and chanhee ... Well the part when bh thought 11 years hadn't changed anything and not an even eternity will . * squeals *
It's awesome how you managed in just 25 chapters to write a story that's not rushed and not slow-paced either . It was perfect .
Thank you for sharing it with us !
<3
Dotoriji
#9
Chapter 25: I am so emotional omg I can't believe it's finished ㅜㅜ
The ending is perfect they're all together and happy...
I don't even know where to begin how to describe how much I enjoyed reading this story and just looking forward to the updates every week ahh I'm going to miss it
Thank you for making the ending so wonderful ㅜㅜ
Chanhee & byunghuns long strong relationship... it's like I can feel the love through the screen;; it's just so precious;; I definitely would love to read about byunghun's confession! (oh and if you're taking requests maybe about their first time?? askfkskdk)
Okay and Changhyun and Jonghyun can they be anymore cute?!? Throughout the whole story they were just so into each other and ugh the best. Now they both have rings to propose to each other! I wonder how that'll turn out lol
Niel being so happy for his best friends and minsu being happy for his new younger brothers made me so emotional ㅜㅜ those two are the perfect match and just so attached to each other seeing them so in love is so heartwarming like they finally found the one they've been looking for their whole lives~

Thank you again for writing this wonderful story!
I enjoyed it so much and I'll definitely be coming back to re-read it~!! <3
lazyfaceu #10
Chapter 25: i'm crying oh my god i screamed when i saw the "completed" status on this book