Part 3 - Chapter 23

I Wanna Love
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23

It had been a flurry of arguments and movement when the six of them reached the convenience store, selecting food, drinks and then cooking. After some time, all six were seated at a plastic table outside the store, eating and waiting in the awkward silence.

Niel and Minsu were pressed against one another still, thighs touching as they ate. Byunghun and Chanhee were directly across from them, Byung still throwing dirty looks at Minsu. Changhyun and Jonghyun sat adjacent to Minsu and Chanhee.

“I’m sorry,” Chanhee began, “I really don’t think I caught your name.” His gaze was fixed on Minsu.

“Bang Minsu,” He replied, bowing a little across the table.

“Nice to meet you. Lee Chanhee. This is Lee Byunghun, my fiancé.” He swung a free hand at Byunghun. Byunghun grunted. Niel frowned at him.

“Nice to meet you too,” Minsu replied, his voice was a perfect mixture of sincerity and blandness.

“So, uh,” Jonghyun looked at Niel awkwardly, “Ahn Daniel, this is my hyung. And he was uh…”

Niel looked at Jonghyun owlishly, waiting for him to finish the awkward sentence.

“He’s the that stood you up the other night,” Byunghun rumbled from across the table.

Niel looked from Byunghun to Jonghyun and then to Minsu. Minsu looked thoughtful, then guilty.

“Yah!” Niel batted Minsu on the shoulder, “You were my blind date?!”

The rest of the table nodded.

“You stood me up!” Niel batted his arm again.

Minsu’s face transformed into a look of guilt and remorse. Niel broke into a peal of giggles. The entire table froze in shock. Niel continued to laugh and laugh, unable to stop himself.

It was so crazy. It was completely ridiculous. It was unbelievable. And the only thing he could do was laugh.

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Changhyun watched as Niel fell sideways onto Minsu, laughing uncontrollably. He smiled along with him.

This hyung is weird.

He looked up at Jonghyun. His face was a mask of horror and confusion. Changhyun himself began to giggle at it. The table, with the exception of hysterical Niel, turned to look at Changhyun as he began laughing too. With all 4 faces turned to him in confusion Changhyun laughed harder; they all looked ridiculous.

“I’m sorry,” He huffed, between giggles, “But you should see your faces. You all look horrified.”

“Yes, well that’s because it seems Niel has suffered a mental break,” Byunghun snapped in reply. Changhyun simply kept giggling.

“I’m… ok… I… just… Oh God,” Niel managed to get out between gasping breaths, he was collapsed against Minsu, holding his stomach, “Are you serious? He was my blind date?”

The rest of them nodded.

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Byunghun glared across the table, trying to light Minsu’s head on fire with his mind. He was still furious. He had been there to see how dejected Niel was after the failed date. Now he thought he could just sweep in and have everything be lovely?

Besides that, Minsu seemed completely unaffected by Byunghun’s dislike. People were normally offended or apologetic, it was off-putting to be simply ignored. It made Byunghun uncomfortable, and therefore even more aggravated.

“I can’t believe you were my blind date.” Niel seemed to finally have a hold of himself again.

“I’m really sorry,” Minsu replied with feeling, his deep voice finally holding something other than blandness.

“Not that sorry. You didn’t even call,” Byunghun countered before he could stop himself. He felt Chanhee punch his leg under the table.

Byunghun turned to his fiancé: Well he didn’t. He said with his eyes.

You behave or so help me… Chanhee’s flashed in reply.

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“Minsu didn’t call because he was in a hurry. It was an accident. He’s normally really considerate,” Jonghyun interjected, sending a fierce scowl at his sunbae.

“Yeah, Minsu is a really good hyung,” Changhyun jumped in to help.

Niel smiled at the rest of the table, his face unreadable.

“I really, honestly don’t care.” He said in a light voice.

Jonghyun was confused. You don’t care if he’s a good guy or you don’t care he stood you up? He wondered, eyebrows knitting together.

“What?” Byunghun protested with indignation.

Oh, you don’t care he stood you up. Jonghyun gathered from that reaction.

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That’s nice, Chanhee thought to himself serenely. Niel was unperturbed by the fact that Minsu had stood him up and Chanhee couldn’t really blame him. He knew what it was like to be so in love with someone that their prickles and faults didn’t really impact you.

“Well,” Chanhee spoke, resisting the urge to put a hand over Byunghun’s mouth, “I’m glad we cleared that up. How old are you Minsu?”

He heard Byunghun give a little snarl beside him. He turned and flashed a warning glance at Byunghun. Byunghun stuck out his lower jaw in a mulish expression, Chanhee smiled at him with more salt than sugar. The rest of the table watched their silent exchange with interest. After a moment Byunghun raised his hands in surrender and began to pay attention to his food instead.

Chanhee turned back to Minsu, still awaiting an answer to his question.

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Minsu watched as Chanhee tamed Byunghun with a sharp look and a smile. It was fascinating. Clearly they were a strong couple. Chanhee turned back to him and Minsu realised he had forgotten to answer the question.

“I’m 26.” He said simply.

“Ah,

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JooHunnit
#1
Chapter 27: This...this was one of the best things i have ever read
Really amazing writing, superb plot- placement and everything was perfect. I loved every character and....it was really spectacular.
IHaveRuinedMyLife
#2
Chapter 27: WOW! Just wow! It's been so long since I read a great, chaptered Teen Top fic, that I almost forgot that this is what I'm living for ㅋㅋ it's just that people don't seem to write them anymore... which is too sad ㅠㅠ
But it also means that I'm incredibly thankful you wrote this story!! I loved it so so so so much!! I'd even go so far, saying it is the best Teen Top fic I've read in... probably two years. I loved your way of describing the characters and the dynamics of each couple. ChangRick was SO ADORABLE in here~~ and ChunJoe were so bittersweet at first and perfect towards the end ♡ as for N.A.P.... it actually drove me crazy ㅋㅋ the moment Minsoo stood Niel up I was literally screaming at my phone ㅋㅋ but it also turned out to be so cute and fluffy and just the right amount of sap xD
so yeah... thumbs up for this!!! thank you so much for sharing~~ (and please continue writing Teen Top fics!! I sometimes feel like I'm the only person with an ongoing Teen Top fic that nobody even reads... it's sad... we need more Teen Top again~~)
chunjixbyungie
#3
Chapter 27: Do i have one ? Rofl . Byunghun can be hilarious sometimes ! I really liked the staring part and the whole what are you staring at.. Why ..because i like them .
Byunghun blushing and playing with the carpet too . very natural ~ he actually confessed first ! How surprising ! It was funny when chanhee said bec you are my best friend lol i bet Byunghun felt his stomach drop . That aside though , I get why he got angry the first time . i mean .. I may too with chanhee laughing in such situation . but the second time i was like .. does he have split personality ?
What angered him in " you better get used to it "?
The part where chanhee thought the doubts would come back but he'd be there to chase them off was so sweet and perfect as a closure ! Really liked it .
And of course we can't forget niel's part . so enjoyable and so funny * thumbs up *
chunjixbyungie
#4
Chapter 26: your brain is fantastically bad at sticking to one project and mine is that way with procrastination , which explains why I just got to read this NOW . I have no word to describe how fluffy and adorable ( Chanhee calling Byung a marshmallow is seriously the best thing ever ) this was ( realistic too ) Byunghun's thoughts about niel having everything he himself lacks and still being scared , unsure of himself .
it's ironic how someone may seem to lead a happy life when they are in fact being bullied .
I'll see you in about four months when i stop being lazy and finally read the next ch .
Dotoriji
#5
Chapter 27: My hearttttt is melting!!! This confession honestly explains so much more why Byunghun was the way that he was throughout the story... his doubts and insecurities. I love how Byunghun was the first to confess and say “I love you” but chanhee was the one to reassure him and really be there to chase Byunghun’s doubts away. Ahhh they’re just perfect for each other <3
Dotoriji
#6
Chapter 26: This is so sweet!!! Ahhhh I love this friendship T^T
Papoufruits
#7
Chapter 25: It felt a little sad that it's completed, though I'm really GLAD it is in a way too, haha. Unfinished fanfics are the worst sometimes... anyway, I love the theme of this story and how you wanted to include everyone's point of view. It kept the interest going.

As a suggestion, I'd love to read more about Byunghun and Chanhee's story when they were younger and how their relationship developed (maybe that's what you meant with "Byunghun's confession story"?). Thank you for this lovely story and can't wait to read more from you! <3
chunjixbyungie
#8
Chapter 25: Waah... Such a sweet ,satisfying ending ~
I enjoyed every moment of it !
Happiness was practically radiating from everyone . Minsoo's thoughts were so heartwarming along with Niel's of course whereas Jonghyun and Changhyun were so cute ~
Byunghun and chanhee ... Well the part when bh thought 11 years hadn't changed anything and not an even eternity will . * squeals *
It's awesome how you managed in just 25 chapters to write a story that's not rushed and not slow-paced either . It was perfect .
Thank you for sharing it with us !
<3
Dotoriji
#9
Chapter 25: I am so emotional omg I can't believe it's finished ㅜㅜ
The ending is perfect they're all together and happy...
I don't even know where to begin how to describe how much I enjoyed reading this story and just looking forward to the updates every week ahh I'm going to miss it
Thank you for making the ending so wonderful ㅜㅜ
Chanhee & byunghuns long strong relationship... it's like I can feel the love through the screen;; it's just so precious;; I definitely would love to read about byunghun's confession! (oh and if you're taking requests maybe about their first time?? askfkskdk)
Okay and Changhyun and Jonghyun can they be anymore cute?!? Throughout the whole story they were just so into each other and ugh the best. Now they both have rings to propose to each other! I wonder how that'll turn out lol
Niel being so happy for his best friends and minsu being happy for his new younger brothers made me so emotional ㅜㅜ those two are the perfect match and just so attached to each other seeing them so in love is so heartwarming like they finally found the one they've been looking for their whole lives~

Thank you again for writing this wonderful story!
I enjoyed it so much and I'll definitely be coming back to re-read it~!! <3
lazyfaceu #10
Chapter 25: i'm crying oh my god i screamed when i saw the "completed" status on this book