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Prompts and Drabbles

Ontae #22 “I’ve seen the way you look at me when you think I don’t notice.” 

Jinki was pulling the last of the prosthetic makeup off his face when Taemin poked his head through the dressing room door still in full costume himself.  

“Good rehearsal today.  Ready for tomorrow?”

Jinki smiled, Taemin was really too adorable in the elf ears and leotard.  “As ready as I can be.”

“You’re great though.”  Taemin came in and propped himself up against the counter.  Jinki had to advert his eyes, the spandex leaving little to the imagination.  “Uhm…thanks.  You are too.”

Taemin smiled noticing the pink tint on Jinki’s face.  “You’re cute.”

Jinki stopped trying to work the knot loose on his neck tie and stared at Taemin wide eyed.  “Excuse me?”

“C’mon Jinki.  Don’t be an .”  Taemin .  “Ive seen the way you look at me when you think I don’t notice.”  

The sprite moved to sit in his lap, slender legs straddling him, replacing Jinki’s hands with his own to remove the tie with ease.  Not hesitating to start undoing the buttons on his shirt.  Jinki swallowed roughly feeling Taemin’s hands brush his neck, the light touch causing goosebumps to form on his skin.  He placed his his hands on Taemin’s thighs, his palms gliding along the smooth material of the leotard.  

Taemin’s eyes sparkled as he smiled at Jinki and he wasn’t sure if the glint was a reflection of his innocence or if there was something mischievous behind them.   Taemin’s rolled his hips, grinding down into Jinki’s lap and he had to bite on his lip to stifle the moan that started to escape.

Definitely mischief.  He thought to himself.  

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shinyan #1
Instead of five million comments, have one epic long one on some favs!

Ch5: Casual "I love you" 's between Ontae is just so perfect. And so is tummy touches because that's Ontae.
Ch9&11: "“Kiss me.” Taemin whispered, his breath warm against Jinki’s cheek.
“W-what?!” The words were barely audible but the shock was clear.
“Kiss me Jinki for you have had my favor.”" -- omg Tae is !!!!! This line. *fans self* And this stable boy Jinki au is <3
Ch12: "“You deserve a better life than I can give you Taemin.”
“If you’re not with me Jinki then I’m not worthy of anything this life has to offer me.”" -- again more stable boy Jinki au is still <3 but added angst and fluff is just <33333
Ch16&17: "He was perfect. Or as close to perfect as anyone could ever be and he hated himself for the jealousy he felt. Why couldn’t he be this perfect? Why couldn’t Jinki look at him like that?" -- unrequited Jongyu love is a shot to the heart, even if happy Ontae is happy. T-T
Ch18: precious insecure and then loving Onkey is precious.
Ch19: this is just so lol. Doctor Jinki is forever the best.
Ch21: The words from the prompt "broken wings" weren't actually mentioned anywhere, but the imagery there was beautiful in the way you interpreted it. Onho was so loving and perfect here.
Ch24: "That only made the other laugh harder. “My barnacle. Hold on okay? Don’t ever let go.”
Jinki held on tighter, balling Taemin’s shirt in his fist. “Never.”" -- this and Ch25. Broke. My. Heart. How. Dare. You. :'(

These drabbles really show how varied your writing is. Love it. :) Sorry again for the long comment but when writing is exciting it happensssssss~~ :P
jinkijeans
#2
Chapter 3: shiiiiiiiiiiiiit
*fansself* Taemin you little . wait no jinki you're the . oh , im screwed now too cuz that was steamy hot aaaaand i kinda want more XD
jinkijeans
#3
Chapter 2: kekekeke you taste like fruit loops XD
aww resting his hand on her for a kick a;kdjf;aklf.
jinkijeans
#4
Chapter 1: aww cute fluffly fuzzy warm feelz.