Ontae PG

Prompts and Drabbles

Ontae with #38 “You fainted…straight into my arms. You know, if you wanted my attention you didn’t have to go to such extremes.”

As Taemin started to come around he heard the beeping first, then the squeak of shoes on linoleum and various voices started to register.  He opened his eyes blinking against the harsh artificial light.  

“Ah.  So how are we feeling?”  

Taemin looked to his left and noticed the doctor standing there, his attention focused on a tablet in his hand.  

“Wait..who…what happened?”  

The doctor smiled and set the tablet down taking a seat next to him.  “Well I’m Dr.  Lee and my colleague Dr. Choi was stitching your friend up, do you remember that?” 

Taemin nodded.  

Dr.  Lee continued.  “Good.  Well then you fainted…straight into my arms.  You know, if you wanted my attention you didn’t have to go to such extremes.”  The doctor laughed at his own cheekiness. 

Taemin blinked a few times not sure how to respond.  “Jongin?”  

“He’s fine, he’s actually out in the waiting area.”

The more he watched the handsome doctor the more he felt humiliated.  Dr.  Lee who had picked his tablet back up started asking him a few questions.  “Are you feeling any nausea?  Dizziness?  Blurred vision?”

Taemin said no to everything before he muttered an apology.  “I’m actually very embarrassed right now.  I guess I never really thought the sight of blood would get to me.”

“Oh it’s quite alright Taemin.”  He chuckled a little.  “Lucky for you I was there to catch you or it might have been a lot more serious.”

Taemin blushed as Dr. Lee offered him another warm smile.  “How about you make it up to me and take me out to dinner?  You know for saving your life and nursing you back to health.”

Taemin’s eyes narrowed but he couldn’t stop the grin that was starting to form on his face.  “You hardly saved my life.”

“You could have been very hurt had I not been there.”  Dr.  Lee looked smug.

“I’ve been out for what?  A few minutes.”

“And I’ve been watching over you the whole time.”  

“Isn’t it morally unethical for you to hit on your patients?”  Taemin came back at him again.

Dr.  Lee looked pleased with himself.  “Technically you’re not my patient anymore.  I just submitted your discharge form.”  

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shinyan #1
Instead of five million comments, have one epic long one on some favs!

Ch5: Casual "I love you" 's between Ontae is just so perfect. And so is tummy touches because that's Ontae.
Ch9&11: "“Kiss me.” Taemin whispered, his breath warm against Jinki’s cheek.
“W-what?!” The words were barely audible but the shock was clear.
“Kiss me Jinki for you have had my favor.”" -- omg Tae is !!!!! This line. *fans self* And this stable boy Jinki au is <3
Ch12: "“You deserve a better life than I can give you Taemin.”
“If you’re not with me Jinki then I’m not worthy of anything this life has to offer me.”" -- again more stable boy Jinki au is still <3 but added angst and fluff is just <33333
Ch16&17: "He was perfect. Or as close to perfect as anyone could ever be and he hated himself for the jealousy he felt. Why couldn’t he be this perfect? Why couldn’t Jinki look at him like that?" -- unrequited Jongyu love is a shot to the heart, even if happy Ontae is happy. T-T
Ch18: precious insecure and then loving Onkey is precious.
Ch19: this is just so lol. Doctor Jinki is forever the best.
Ch21: The words from the prompt "broken wings" weren't actually mentioned anywhere, but the imagery there was beautiful in the way you interpreted it. Onho was so loving and perfect here.
Ch24: "That only made the other laugh harder. “My barnacle. Hold on okay? Don’t ever let go.”
Jinki held on tighter, balling Taemin’s shirt in his fist. “Never.”" -- this and Ch25. Broke. My. Heart. How. Dare. You. :'(

These drabbles really show how varied your writing is. Love it. :) Sorry again for the long comment but when writing is exciting it happensssssss~~ :P
jinkijeans
#2
Chapter 3: shiiiiiiiiiiiiit
*fansself* Taemin you little . wait no jinki you're the . oh , im screwed now too cuz that was steamy hot aaaaand i kinda want more XD
jinkijeans
#3
Chapter 2: kekekeke you taste like fruit loops XD
aww resting his hand on her for a kick a;kdjf;aklf.
jinkijeans
#4
Chapter 1: aww cute fluffly fuzzy warm feelz.