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Ontae #19 “The paint’s supposed to go where?” Rated PG

 

het!Ontae

Eunsook reclined on the sofa, feet propped up, a pillow behind her back and a bowl of cereal resting on top of her pregnant belly.  She eyed Taemin suspiciously taking a large bite, catching a drop of milk with the back of her hand before it dripped down her chin. 

“The paints supposed to go where?”  She nodded towards the paint can he had sat down on the coffee table in front of her, with a pale yellow swatch on the top.  

“The nursery.”  

“Tch.”  She remembered their argument the weekend before.  “What nursery?”

“The one that’s replacing my office.”  

Eunsook’s mouth fell open in surprise.  “Taem…seriously?”

She tried to sit up awkwardly, moving the bowl of cereal to the table next to her.  “Don’t.”  Taemin came and sat next to her, helping to adjust the pillow behind her.  “I don’t need an office, but we need a nursery.  I’m sorry I argued with you before.”  He brushed some of the stray hairs that had fallen out of her messy ponytail away from her face.  

“But why yellow?”

“It’s neutral, since we don’t know if it’s a boy or girl. It’s bright.  And I thought it would look good with all the giraffe stuff you’ve bought already.”

Eunsook smiled.  

“Is that okay?  I wanted it to be a surprise but since you’re home all the time now…”

She nodded.  

“Are you sure?”  He noticed her eyes watering and her nose turning pink.  “Awe don’t cry.”

“It’s perfect.  Thank you.”  She blinked and he caught the tears with his thumb before he kissed her.  

“You taste like fruit loops.”  He laughed before he snuggled next to her, placing his palms to rest on her large bump, waiting for the baby to kick.  

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shinyan #1
Instead of five million comments, have one epic long one on some favs!

Ch5: Casual "I love you" 's between Ontae is just so perfect. And so is tummy touches because that's Ontae.
Ch9&11: "“Kiss me.” Taemin whispered, his breath warm against Jinki’s cheek.
“W-what?!” The words were barely audible but the shock was clear.
“Kiss me Jinki for you have had my favor.”" -- omg Tae is !!!!! This line. *fans self* And this stable boy Jinki au is <3
Ch12: "“You deserve a better life than I can give you Taemin.”
“If you’re not with me Jinki then I’m not worthy of anything this life has to offer me.”" -- again more stable boy Jinki au is still <3 but added angst and fluff is just <33333
Ch16&17: "He was perfect. Or as close to perfect as anyone could ever be and he hated himself for the jealousy he felt. Why couldn’t he be this perfect? Why couldn’t Jinki look at him like that?" -- unrequited Jongyu love is a shot to the heart, even if happy Ontae is happy. T-T
Ch18: precious insecure and then loving Onkey is precious.
Ch19: this is just so lol. Doctor Jinki is forever the best.
Ch21: The words from the prompt "broken wings" weren't actually mentioned anywhere, but the imagery there was beautiful in the way you interpreted it. Onho was so loving and perfect here.
Ch24: "That only made the other laugh harder. “My barnacle. Hold on okay? Don’t ever let go.”
Jinki held on tighter, balling Taemin’s shirt in his fist. “Never.”" -- this and Ch25. Broke. My. Heart. How. Dare. You. :'(

These drabbles really show how varied your writing is. Love it. :) Sorry again for the long comment but when writing is exciting it happensssssss~~ :P
jinkijeans
#2
Chapter 3: shiiiiiiiiiiiiit
*fansself* Taemin you little . wait no jinki you're the . oh , im screwed now too cuz that was steamy hot aaaaand i kinda want more XD
jinkijeans
#3
Chapter 2: kekekeke you taste like fruit loops XD
aww resting his hand on her for a kick a;kdjf;aklf.
jinkijeans
#4
Chapter 1: aww cute fluffly fuzzy warm feelz.