Ontae PG

Prompts and Drabbles

Ontae #14 “Never in a million years.”

A companion to Chapter 16

Warnings:  Unrequited love and bitter bff Jonghyun


Jonghyun heard Jinki’s laugh from across the room.  He downed his glass of champagne in almost one gulp, immediately reaching for the one next to him.  Only a sip had been taken from it during the toast and it’s owner had disappeared leaving the drink behind.  Jonghyun shrugged and downed that one too.  

Taemin was nearly doubled over laughing, his nose crinkling, smile wide, holding onto Jinki. 

The dining hall was small but that’s all they had really needed.  It was an intimate ceremony with only a few of their closest friends, neither side had families that attended, both disapproving of the marriage.  

Who could possibly disapprove of this?  Jonghyun thought.  Even through his bitterness he watched the newly wed couple.  If they weren’t smiling and laughing, they were looking at each other with complete and total adoration.  

He cursed to himself.  If they had a bigger ceremony there would be more champagne he thought, looking around to see if there were any other unattended glasses.  

“Here.”  Jonghyun turned to see Taemin holding out a champagne flute.  “You look like you needed this.”

Taemin had come to him leaving Jinki and Minho going on loudly about something.  Minho was doing something really weird with his face and Jonghyun didn’t even try to figure it out.  “Thanks.”  He gladly took the drink, sipping it this time.

“Are you okay?”

Jonghyun looked at him confused.  “I’m fine.  Why?”

Taemin nodded.  “I know.”

“You know what?”

“About your feelings for Jinki.”

Well .  Jonghyun downed the remaining alcohol, not really caring if he looked like a lush at this point.  Never in a million years would he have pictured himself here.  Why can’t the ground just open up and swallow him whole right now?

“It’s okay.”  Taemin backtracked a little.  “I mean…I’m not angry or anything.  I just want you to be happy to.”

Jonghyun knew Taemin was trying to help, but this conversation was just dragging his pride through the dirt.  “I am happy Taemin.  I’m happy for you both.”  Jonghyun thanked the gods that Jinki was headed this way.  

Jinki hugged Taemin from behind.  “Ready to go hubby?  I think it’s time I get you back to the honeymoon suite.”

Jonghyun snorted.  “You mean your apartment.”

Jinki glared at him but couldn’t stop smiling.  “Tonight it’s our honeymoon suite.”  He bit at Taemin’s ear playfully. 

~

The couple said their goodbyes to the few remaining guests before getting in their getaway car.  Which just happened to be Taemin’s silver hatchback Honda Civic decorated with balloons, cans and window chalk.  

Jonghyun stood outside and watched them drive away.  He was contemplating on walking to the nearest bar when a bottle was pressed into his chest.  

“Here.”  Jonghyun looked up at Minho taking the bottle of champagne.   “You looked like you could use it.”

Jonghyun couldn’t help but laugh.  “Am I that obvious?”

Minho just shrugged.

“Fine.  Fine.  But you better go find another bottle, because you’re coming back to my place and drinking with me.”

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shinyan #1
Instead of five million comments, have one epic long one on some favs!

Ch5: Casual "I love you" 's between Ontae is just so perfect. And so is tummy touches because that's Ontae.
Ch9&11: "“Kiss me.” Taemin whispered, his breath warm against Jinki’s cheek.
“W-what?!” The words were barely audible but the shock was clear.
“Kiss me Jinki for you have had my favor.”" -- omg Tae is !!!!! This line. *fans self* And this stable boy Jinki au is <3
Ch12: "“You deserve a better life than I can give you Taemin.”
“If you’re not with me Jinki then I’m not worthy of anything this life has to offer me.”" -- again more stable boy Jinki au is still <3 but added angst and fluff is just <33333
Ch16&17: "He was perfect. Or as close to perfect as anyone could ever be and he hated himself for the jealousy he felt. Why couldn’t he be this perfect? Why couldn’t Jinki look at him like that?" -- unrequited Jongyu love is a shot to the heart, even if happy Ontae is happy. T-T
Ch18: precious insecure and then loving Onkey is precious.
Ch19: this is just so lol. Doctor Jinki is forever the best.
Ch21: The words from the prompt "broken wings" weren't actually mentioned anywhere, but the imagery there was beautiful in the way you interpreted it. Onho was so loving and perfect here.
Ch24: "That only made the other laugh harder. “My barnacle. Hold on okay? Don’t ever let go.”
Jinki held on tighter, balling Taemin’s shirt in his fist. “Never.”" -- this and Ch25. Broke. My. Heart. How. Dare. You. :'(

These drabbles really show how varied your writing is. Love it. :) Sorry again for the long comment but when writing is exciting it happensssssss~~ :P
jinkijeans
#2
Chapter 3: shiiiiiiiiiiiiit
*fansself* Taemin you little . wait no jinki you're the . oh , im screwed now too cuz that was steamy hot aaaaand i kinda want more XD
jinkijeans
#3
Chapter 2: kekekeke you taste like fruit loops XD
aww resting his hand on her for a kick a;kdjf;aklf.
jinkijeans
#4
Chapter 1: aww cute fluffly fuzzy warm feelz.