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Title [7/10]

For me, the title is not what I've expected. It did give me a hint about what is the story about but not much. Like 30%? I don't have any idea what it should be like but, good try by the way :)

Description [6/10]
Your description is pretty good tho. It's kind of related to the title. However, you gave the readers too much information about the story. The first time I read the plot, I could guess that they will die. When this happens, the readers will not interest in reading the chapters because you already telling it in your description. I don't think you should put 'Kyungsoo fell ill. And Kai was left there for his death.'

Story Plot & Developement [24/30]
It's good but some grammar mistakes and spelling makes me bored in reading your story. It did give the emotions, the feelings to be someone in there. I actually like it how you describe Kai's feelings in Chapter 1, Paragraph 3 when Jongin was walking in the hallway. And, I'm kind of annoyed by the word 'love' you used in the story. Imagine that you are dating with someone and you used 'love' all the tim