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Title [9/10]

When I see you again, your title already gives a reader an idea that this story is a drama. At first I was confused on why you used angst as a part of your story's genre. I even read your title twice to make sure. But this is another topic so I will just focus on this later on. Your title speaks out separation and when I read it the first time I felt a tug in my heart, I swear. That is why when I saw your story in the reviewer's thread, I told myself I am going to review this one. In terms of your title's relativity to the story I can say that you have done a good job especially since it is only a one shot story. Good job on this one! But I have one more thing to say, your title is somewhat common? I am more like a reader who sticks out with titles that has symbolisms. But don't fret this is only my opinion.

Description [7/10]

Your description is more like describing your story. Does that make sense? Well, I kind of think that a story's description is like the selling point of a story. Since it is the selling point so you have got to make it appealing. When a reader walks in a bookstore, picks up a book, don't they look at the back of it and read the description? If it suits to their taste, they buy it. So try imagining yourself walking into a bookstore, picks up a book and read your description. Does it appeals you? Does it make you want to buy it? I suggest that you put the main point of your story in your description. Original version: There is always so much to tell and so much to hear. How much of it can we tell and hear in our whole life? "I'll tell you the next time!" is such a common phrase, because there is always more to tell. This is the story of two people, who could never finish telling each other what they had to say. But they promise to say these things, when they see each other again. Suggested version: I missed him everyday, but I know time will pass. I wish I could tell someone about it. But I know I could