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Title [7/10]

The title did not appeal me at all... I was thinking it would be some really bad stuff... It's not! But I cannot think of a better title. It's also quite common since when I searched it up on the searchbar, many other popular fanfics had the same name. It's a name that is common and I have no appeal to.

Description [10/10]

The description was great! It showed me that this would be a good read. There isn't much to give away though, is there? The story is quite domestic, after all.

Story Plot & Developement [28/30]

The story went fast, though what am I to expect when there is no real story excerpt the fact that it's Jonghyun and the others growing up and Jinki and Kibum's relationship growing as well. There is no main plot, since it's scenarios. The plot is that Kibum and Jinki grow a family together depicting of the other SHINee members. I like it, but since there really is no actual plot... Yeah.

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