☎Killergal : Black Rose
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Title [9/10]
A good title, I am not in love with it nor am I hating it. Honestly, I wish for a title more relating to the plot other than a simple, "Black Rose' I can understand why you put in that title though:)
Description [10/10]
Oh my god, your description really got me, you describe it like in a 'mysterious way' and I just simply love it! Yes, it totally gives mw an idea of waht is a story is about. Thank you for such a wonderful description!
Story Plot & Developement [26/30]
Hmm...The plot seems quite confusing for me to understand. I mean, I don't even see a in your story. Where was it? The only part where I enjoyed was how you describe everything so rich in details and that, unfortunately, does not help gain any more marks in this section. Good try though!
Grammar [28/30]
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