Chapter 5

Forever...
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Jessica: So where did you two lovebirds go?

Tiffany: Arghh!!! Stop it!!! You can make fun now, when you like someone, I'll get you back.

Jessica: I don't see you insulting me now, I like someone now, I always like someone. Just not enough to have force-five freakouts over dates with them.

Tiffany: I have a feeling we're talking about me again...

Jessica: Your point?

Tiffany: My point is that...

Tiffany grabs pillows off the bed and starts flinging them at Jessica.

Jessica: Hey, don't hurt me!! I'm so sweet and innocent.

Jessica bats her eyelashes innocently.

Tiffany can't help but to laugh.

Jessica: Anyways, where did you go? What did she say? How many times did she kiss you??

Tiffany: A romantic restaurant. Not much. Once.

Jessica: Girl, give me some details, I don't want obvious answers. The stuff you gave me I could have guessed. I want the juicy details! Aw, heck, just tell me about the kiss.

Tiffany: She kissed me outside the door.

Jessica: This door? Darn, I should have looked out the peephole.

Tiffany: It wasn't anything mushy like you would have, she kissed me on the cheek.

Jessica sighs: Aiyeah, you made such a big deal out of it. A kiss on the cheek means " I had a nice time, NOT, I'm just gonna kiss you on the cheek to give you closure, stay the heck away from me!"

Tiffany: I'm sure Taetae doesn't think like you.

Jessica: Taetae? So fast have nickname for her already?

Tiffany blushed: Dae..

Jessica: Anyway are you sure?

Tiffany: Shut up!

Tiffany moves to hit her with the pillow again.

Jessica holds her arms up in the universal "don't hit me" position: I'm only telling the truth. Taeyeon is good looking. Its a law of nature that t

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o