Chapter 11

Forever...
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The next day.... ( Saturday )

Tiffany's phone rings.

Tiffany ( sleepily ): Yoboseyo?

Taeyeon: Fany-ah? Are you awake yet?

Tiffany: Aniyo, still asleep... I went to sleep at 4 in the morning. Sica insisted on trying on every dress in every store last night. Then, we went for supper where Sica ate practically every thing there was to eat. Then, she couldn't sleep, so I had to stay up and play game with her until 4 o clock. Did I mention that she happened to be crunching loudly on all of the snacks in the house while she played game? I couldn't even pretend to play while I slept.

Taeyeon: Aigoo... I was gonna see if you wanted to go out for breakfast, but maybe you should stay in. I'll bring you lunch, okay? Call me when you wake up.

Tiffany: Jal jja...

Taeyeon ( laughs ): Sweet dreams

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Taeyeon went to buy Tiffany lunch, then decided she would make it for her instead. She went to the supermarket and picked up all the ingredients needed for lunch. Then she went up to Fany's place.

The door buzzed and Jessica answered it.

Jessica ( energetically ): Annyeong Taeyeon! Fany is still asleep.

Taeyeon ( sarcastically ): Yea, thanks for tiring her out last night.

Jessica: Hey, I've had just as much sleep as her and I'm not tired. Don't blame me.

Taeyeon: Don't get defensive on me. Where's the kitchen? I'm gonna make my sweetie lunch.

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o