Chapter 1

Forever...
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Seoul Magazine Headings:
Famous singer Kim Taeyeon was seen with Lee Soonkyu [Sunny]. When asked by reporters, the two neither denied nor admitted to a relationship.
Kim Taeyeon will be in California this week for a promotion.

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California

Tiffany and Jessica were in California for a vacation, the two had wanted to go since forever and finally got the chance when Jessica's brother had to go on business and decided he would put up with them for the trip. Donghae (Jessica's brother) had been to California hundreds of times and knew his way around easily.

Donghae :What do you girls wanna do now?

Tiffany: What else?!

Jessica :Shopping!!!! Where is the best place to go shopping? I would consider myself a failure if I don't have at least 2 suitcases full of stuff When the trip is over!
Jessica and Tiffany burst out in laughter.

At a shopping centre

Donghae: I have to meet with a client. Why don't we meet back at the hotel tonight?

Jessica: And just how are we supposed to get there? We don't know even know our way around!

Donghae: Just travel by train?

Jessica: Ya right, by a train to who knows where.

Donghae sighs and says hesitantly: Would you girl like me to come pick you up?

Jessica: Dae, please. Kamsahamnida!

Jessica pulls Tiffany away and runs before her brother can refuse or change his min

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o