Chapter 20

Forever...
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Taeyeon followed Tiffany and Yuri, fuming and wondering what they were up to..

Taeyeon watched as the two chatted and laughed and went shopping. They bought bags full of items. Stuffs that she should have been buying with Tiffany. Taeyeon watched Yuri wait as Tiffany tried on several outfits. She watched as Tiffany asked Yuri's opinion and bought the dress Yuri liked. She watched enviously as they went food shopping. Dropping items in the cart and being silly, making jokes, talking light-heartedly and nonsensically. She watched as they entered a florist and Tiffany left with a huge bouquet of expensive roses. Taeyeon is jealous when she saw them eating dinner, Tiffany smiling and laughing the whole time.

Taeyeon watched as Yuri opened the car door for Tiffany again and watched her girlfriend get inside her best friend's car.
Taeyeon didn't know what to do, so she followed. Yuri drove, not to Tiffany and Jessica's flat, but to a hotel. Taeyeon followed them as they entered the grand revolving doors of the hotel. She watched as they walked into the enormous marble accented lobby. Watched as they stepped into the elevator. Watched as Yuri pulled Tiffany gently to stop her from running into someone getting out of the elevator. She watched the elevator stop at the top floor and entered a second elevator pushing the correct button and getting out on the 30th floor.

There, she hesitated, she didn't know which room they were in. Then, she saw a be

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o